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DerekZhang

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2023-04-09 JoinedBrazil
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  • DerekZhang
    DerekZhang10mth
    Replied to Gutsygallant

    Yes, he will become a common supernatural creature: a werewolf in the world of Teen Wolf. It is interesting to note that there are few stories in which the protagonist is only a werewolf. As for the transformation, it will take a while.

    Ch 3 chapter 3
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    Teen Wolf: New Life
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  • DerekZhang
    DerekZhang10mth
    Replied to Porthos10

    Thank you! First, I want to create a solid foundation for the story. Yes, the protagonist will get involved in the plot, but it may take a little time, as I don't want to create too forced a situation for him to enter the supernatural world. As for his goal, he just wants to have a fun life with no regrets.

    Ch 3 chapter 3
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    Teen Wolf: New Life
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  • DerekZhang
    DerekZhang10mth
    Replied to Ballad

    I really thought about starting the story with him already being a werewolf but I thought it would be better for him to transform during the story as that would make the story more fun

    Ch 1 chapter 1
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    Teen Wolf: New Life
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  • DerekZhang
    DerekZhang10mth
    Replied to Ballad

    yes he is childish but that's on purpose I want to create a mc that throughout history starts to mature and don't forget that he was only 20 years old before he died

    Ch 2 chapter 2
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    Teen Wolf: New Life
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  • DerekZhang
    DerekZhang11mth
    Posted

    the mc is really impressive how dumb he is [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

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    One Piece: Cursed and From Another World
    Anime & Comics · Drive_Night326
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  • DerekZhang
    DerekZhang11mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 4 Playing with Sandbag!
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    Lookism: The Road to Unstoppable Strength
    Anime & Comics · VoidSlay
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  • DerekZhang
    DerekZhang11mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 4 Chapter 3: Rising Above Expectations
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    NBA System (Rewrite)
    Sports · Greeen
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  • DerekZhang
    DerekZhang11mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 10 Talking to Allison [Edited]
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    Reborn as Stiles Stilinski in the Orange County
    TV · FOUNTAINOFYOUTH
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  • DerekZhang
    DerekZhang11mth
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 20 Master Hamir
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    Marvel: I Can Enhance My Talent Infinitely
    Movies · S_Pandey_0170
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  • DerekZhang
    DerekZhang1yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 6 The Ring
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    White Tiger (Lookism Fanfic)
    Anime & Comics · STRO
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  • DerekZhang
    DerekZhang1yr
    Posted

    the chapters are very short and the story does not make much sense blue lock would not call a defender for a project that is focused on creating the best striker and the mc sincerely as a player but that he is a monster physically and is a good defender that doesn't change the fact that he seems to be made of glass since basically he's just not a professional because he keeps getting hurt a tip for the author if he wanted to write about a defensive player the mc could be a striker and during the blue lock he would turn a defender

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    Blue Lock: The Destroyer
    Anime & Comics · Wraze_Vengeance
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  • DerekZhang
    DerekZhang1yr
    Commented

    honestly the only thing that i was thinking after reading this chapter is those chinese sports stories where the protagonist has the option of playing in the national team he was born in which is stronger better more or levels of that he decides to play in a much better national team weak I know it will be necessary for the mc to participate in the blue lock but if you think about it, it doesn't make much sense for him to leave the base of a club where with the system and his skills it would be relatively easy to become a professional player maybe me I'm exaggerating a bit but I really hate it when that happens in Chinese stories mainly because I'm the son of a Chinese and most of these stories disgust me

    Ch 1 Facing one of the best
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    Anime & Comics · Saint_Hubris
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  • DerekZhang
    DerekZhang1yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter

    Ch 2 Learning the basics of Football
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    Anime & Comics · Saint_Hubris
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  • DerekZhang
    DerekZhang1yr
    Commented

    Honestly I was enjoying the story even if I found the mc's decisions questionable to say the least and even then I didn't understand why so many people were complaining about the mc but after that chapter I think I honestly understood the story has a lot of potential but the mc's decisions are ciseramete dumb and meaningless since they would have easier and less dangerous solutions I wish you luck with the story but unfortunately it's not my type of story a tip and that you could try to make mc not look like a stupid and innocent child and give him a motivation to want it being a hero I think that would already improve the story a lot

    Ch 8 Hall of Justice
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    Zodiac (DC)
    Anime & Comics · Anubis_Creationz
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