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The story is really good. It’s extremely engaging and well written. The only critique that I have is that It took a long time to insert the modern family cast into the story. Their minimum participation is a bit discouraging for those readers who were expecting more of the MC participating the modern family show. However, in the last chapters it shows that the author added the character to the modern family story by making him have a decent sized interaction with the cast. If possible the author could make sure that this interaction is significant and consistent throughout the whole story.
I just writing this review because I have an idea about the title instead of being "The ruthless wind" that is bit generic and have a lack of creativity. You could have named the story with something in line with "hurricane" as it is a "ruthless" wind strong enough that destroy anything that get on its way.
emyrs, pendagron or perverell
Hermione Granger or Daphne Greengrass or Fluer Delacour
You should do just three: Hermione Granger, Daphne Greengrass and Fluer Delacour
It is not worthy!
You could use the Webnovel app to download the following novels to you be able to read them offline. My recommendations are: 1-From Thug to Idol: Transmigrating to a Survival Show 2-Rich Daughter Reincarnates as Her Eighteen-Year-Old Self to Rescue Her Younger Brothers! 3- Everyone Wants to Pamper the Bigshot Researcher After Her Rebirth!
I probaly would be even worse as i would try to frame it so i would be able to see and treasure it everyday!