Review Detail of Manu_Pereira in Redoing My Life (Modern Family)

The story is really good. It’s extremely engaging and well written. The only critique that I have is that It took a long time to insert the modern family cast into the story. Their minimum participation is a bit discouraging for those readers who were expecting more of the MC participating the modern family show. However, in the last chapters it shows that the author added the character to the modern family story by making him have a decent sized interaction with the cast. If possible the author could make sure that this interaction is significant and consistent throughout the whole story.