I really don't care about those people, feels like you are building them up just so they will be all mouth open and have exaggerated reactions to the main character, then, they will either be quickly eliminated or join the mc in some way as subordinates, 5 chapters of the reaction of borderline irrelevant chapters is a bit too much. I am mildly shocked that you are giving them such buildup that will probably lead to nothing.

another chapter of people saying how amazing the mc is and being impressed by how much mary sue power she has, "look how special i am" its like she is the center of the universe, and it keeps going over and over and over, just skip the "wow you are so incredible" dialogs, if you did it your fic would not even have 10 chapters

it feels like this story should have ended 40 chapters ago

not gonna lie, some of the dialog is so bad that it reads like some bad ia wrote it

how come after a year hiatus you got worst a writing instead of improving, you are a special type of mentally challenged.

i am droping the story, its just too bad, cant keep reading, too low quality

You don't need a system why would you add that? You are doing great, if you want something to measure his power just go to konosuba and get a guild status card, you dont need a system

in wish fulfillment you actually do things, you know, fulfill wishes, this feels more like a random guy got trapped inside the mc body and cant do anything about it.

there is no romance here, name of the fic is fake news

this is his game looks, without the hat

This is Brendan, dude does not have any edgy isekai looks, he is like, the most average dude ever, no white hair, btw he got the scars from an angry salamence from when he was like 4 years old, that is why he usually uses a white hat.

thats so boring

fake news, there are no chaps on the link

About Great Red, Ophis and other big characters, unless you want them on your story, you don't need to care about it, its a fanfic, you are the one in power here, most of those big players never even appeared or fought on the source material, you don't need to make up problems for yourself, as an author, you already have all the power and control you need.

You made a character that evolves and adapts, you just needed to make him be exposed to the power of destruction via Rias, adapt to it, get immunity and then her brother would be borderline useless against him, an instant loss becomes a hard earned fight, you made a mini doomsday, he could grow while fighting, he would have the resilience and stamina while not having the destructive power someone on his level should have, it was room for improvement, his dilema would be like "i can survive anything, but i can't protect anyone" leading him to improve, this way you have freedom to move around and do things while still having a "weakness" to explore, if you wanted to give him freedom it was unnecessary to make him absurdly strong, now the story is about everyone saying how amazing he is, comes across as you wanting the characters to praise you and stroke your ego all the time.

Personal opinion, the ideas you had on those 6 chapters, it was good, the relations of all characters, the build up, it had a lot of potential, more that what you are building now, you just made a growth type character into a "cheat character from the start", a normal self insert into a generic broken isekai insert, all the tension, all the drama, all the danger the mc could be in, its all gone, now its replaced with everyone just being "surprised with how special the mc is", one of those "solve everything by just being amazing" kind of character, all tension is dead and the suspension of disbelieve is at its max.

Why don't you just delete the first 6 chapters? Everything you build up on those 6 chapters is gone or irrelevant, just delete them, its very frustrating to know i wasted my time on those 6

This is not a real original fanfic, its not a copy of other fanfic, its just a lesser copy of the original overlord, nothing changed, the mc has his own thoughts but absolutely nothing on the story changed from the original. Re reading the original source material is better that reading this.

The true score of this novel is 2.5 or less, the author is just deleting the vast majority of reviews that are below 3 stars, it does not matter if the review is well thought or have actual solid criticism or the plain truth, the author will just delete the review, because he decided that his cultivation fanfic masquerading as a naruto fanfic is really not that good.

no, i don't think he is