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littlemaomao_

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I write sensually dramatic stuff

2023-03-25 JoinedGlobal
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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_6mth
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    The story is very interesting!! Author nailed the character’s description. I can imagine the events happening in every chapter! Each chapter held a very strong impression every time I read it. I hope this goes big, nice work author! [img=recommend]

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    Mafia Princess: Raised by Wolves
    Fantasy · Tizzz
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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_6mth
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    The synopsis is intriguing, story development is intriguing, everything about it is intriguing! The author nailed the dramatic way of the plot building It’s quite a sad story tho’ but I’m expecting a great future to this book. Nice work, author ^^

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    HIS ADOPTED SON LOVER
    Fantasy · Ray10
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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_6mth
    Replied to BataraKama

    thank you luv💕

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    Lady of the Devil
    Fantasy · littlemaomao_
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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_6mth
    Replied to Entei_Arts

    thank you so much for the support, really appreciate it [img=recommend]

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    Lady of the Devil
    Fantasy · littlemaomao_
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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_6mth
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    This is a very nice story ! The prologue tho. It's very captivating and the author manage to describe the world building very clearly. The thing is I need more chapters -^- Love the story, I hope this goes big. Keep up the good work author!

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    Grief of the Endless
    Fantasy · Entei_Arts
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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_6mth
    Replied to Roxanne_Writes

    Thank you so much for the support! Really appreciate it ❤️

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    Lady of the Devil
    Fantasy · littlemaomao_
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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_6mth
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    Interesting read. I really like the way the author introduced the characters first in the opening volume, it’s witty! The story opened with a scene where the main character, Cecilia, got her “second chance” to seek revenge. I must say that this story will be fast paced. Keep up with the pacing and you’ll be okay. Then, consider using some marks and descriptions to clear the conversations among each character. Keep up the good work, author! [img=Loving it]

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    In this second life, I shall take back my throne
    Fantasy · Roxanne_Writes
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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_6mth
    Replied to Jejeyy

    I tried, and it does not work either:((

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    Lady of the Devil
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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_6mth
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    First of all, synopsis, I suggest the author to make it clearer on how story plotting will be. For the chapters, well, the world-building is amazing, author described it very well so that you get the information of what the events are and where did it happened. There’s a lot of characters in the first few pages so I need to go back a few times to remind me who the character was. But it’s fine. Mind to the paragraph as well, you may split some so it won’t seem too long. Overall, it’s a nice story. Keep up the good work, author^^

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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_6mth
    Replied to Jejeyy

    Suree, it’s on my profile ^^

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    Lady of the Devil
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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_7mth
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    Insteresting. I can see how the author wants this story to be made. Some grammatical issues but it does not matter. Writing does not mean that you already are an expert then you write. But all about learning, from every single word you type, you will grow beautifully. Well, keep up the good work, author!

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    Hell in Heaven: The devil incarnate.
    Fantasy · blissfullover99
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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_7mth
    Posted

    Just finished reading the chapters, I’m gonna give this a 5 star rating. The world-building is clear, the story is intriguing. Well, EVEN THE SYNOPSIS IS INTRIGUING. I dunno, i just need more chapters rn. Great work, Author!

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    Secret That Lies In The Heart
    Fantasy · Favi_gold
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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_7mth
    Replied to Goodness_OG

    Thank you for the support and review , it really means a lot

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    Lady of the Devil
    Fantasy · littlemaomao_
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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_7mth
    Posted

    Okay, first of all, let’s give the author a big appreciation for creating such a great book! The plotting, characters and world-building are very intriguing and captivating us as a reader. The storytelling also! As if it summons you into the book. It is so alive. Luisa and the Witcher, five star⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Well-done and keep up the good work, author.💕

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    Luisa and the Witcher
    Fantasy · Goodness_OG
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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_7mth
    Replied to HelenaHomerHere

    Omg! Thank you very much for the appreciation and support, it really means a lot[img=Loving it] Good luck on your future writing projects as well!!!

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    Lady of the Devil
    Fantasy · littlemaomao_
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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_7mth
    Posted

    Hi, I’m back on writing this new book. I hope you enjoy it[img=Loving it]

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    Lady of the Devil
    Fantasy · littlemaomao_
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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_11mth
    Posted

    Interesting story, I will definitely keep up with the updates to see how will the story goes~ keep up the good work author!! ✨🔥

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    Lilith: The Angel of Death
    Fantasy · Tiff_Lin
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  • littlemaomao_
    littlemaomao_1yr
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    This story stirred our imagination in a very good way, with a very strong opening scene. . . This story was told in very good descriptive ways, the author didn’t seem to force their readers to imagine their own imagination. Instead, they gave space for readers to imagine in their own perspectives. Unfortunately, there was still some vocabulary that unsuitable to use in some parts. Also, I suggested author to part between the character’s dialogue and the descriptive explanations. I often get confused with ways author from a sci-fi or action genre write, it felt too fast, like, the MC did this and suddenly that. I also suggest the author to consider using a detailed explanation on character’s emotions/expressions. But overall, it’s a very interesting story. In fact, I can’t wait to see the what will happen next. . . So much room for improvement, so, Ganbatte, author!!! Keep up the good work!!!

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    The Magi-Tech Academy
    Sci-fi · hypoxis
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