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Interesting read. I really like the way the author introduced the characters first in the opening volume, it’s witty! The story opened with a scene where the main character, Cecilia, got her “second chance” to seek revenge. I must say that this story will be fast paced. Keep up with the pacing and you’ll be okay. Then, consider using some marks and descriptions to clear the conversations among each character. Keep up the good work, author! [img=Loving it]
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First of all, synopsis, I suggest the author to make it clearer on how story plotting will be. For the chapters, well, the world-building is amazing, author described it very well so that you get the information of what the events are and where did it happened. There’s a lot of characters in the first few pages so I need to go back a few times to remind me who the character was. But it’s fine. Mind to the paragraph as well, you may split some so it won’t seem too long. Overall, it’s a nice story. Keep up the good work, author^^
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Insteresting. I can see how the author wants this story to be made. Some grammatical issues but it does not matter. Writing does not mean that you already are an expert then you write. But all about learning, from every single word you type, you will grow beautifully. Well, keep up the good work, author!
Okay, first of all, let’s give the author a big appreciation for creating such a great book! The plotting, characters and world-building are very intriguing and captivating us as a reader. The storytelling also! As if it summons you into the book. It is so alive. Luisa and the Witcher, five star⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Well-done and keep up the good work, author.💕
This story stirred our imagination in a very good way, with a very strong opening scene. . . This story was told in very good descriptive ways, the author didn’t seem to force their readers to imagine their own imagination. Instead, they gave space for readers to imagine in their own perspectives. Unfortunately, there was still some vocabulary that unsuitable to use in some parts. Also, I suggested author to part between the character’s dialogue and the descriptive explanations. I often get confused with ways author from a sci-fi or action genre write, it felt too fast, like, the MC did this and suddenly that. I also suggest the author to consider using a detailed explanation on character’s emotions/expressions. But overall, it’s a very interesting story. In fact, I can’t wait to see the what will happen next. . . So much room for improvement, so, Ganbatte, author!!! Keep up the good work!!!