Revara
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Revara14dReplied to blacCh 7 Dungeon Gate?- Revara16dReplied to detonador_extreme
Exactly :)
Unsure of what to do. He tried to think of an explanation. After a range of thoughts, he finally realized that he was not on earth anymore. As the voice said, it's some place called Revara. Maybe that is what this planet was called. With a little bit of clearance in his mind, he readied himself to talk to the voice. - Revara22dCommentedCh 100 100. Bigger picture
- Revara28dReplied to Rowenoak84Ch 98 98. The ideal Specimen
- Revara2mthReplied to david_boyer
Sure thing!
{Author's notes: Add your name here and I shall use them in future chapters for my characters:) - Revara3mthReplied to Algalon
He vaguely remembers his past, without specifics. It's like recalling languages learned but not personal identity.
After hearing this, Viru couldn't contain his excitement anymore. He jumped in happiness as he was going to get magical powers through a system exactly like the video games and light novels that he had read before. - Revara3mthReplied to Wesley_McCaslinCh 5 5. Swamp monster
- Revara3mthReplied to LOVE_cats321
Noted :)
{Author's notes: Add your name here and I shall use them in future chapters for my characters:) - Revara3mthReplied to Insidious_Mask
I appreciate your review and take your feedback seriously. I agree that some of my initial chapters may have contained more descriptions than necessary, but I have been working diligently to rectify this. As a first-time writer, I was unsure of how much detail to include, but I have since learned and improved my writing style. The upcoming chapters are fast-paced with proper descriptive narrations, and I have already significantly reduced unnecessary information. Rest assured, I will continue to edit and refine my work to ensure the best possible outcome. Please continue reading as I am confident you will notice a significant improvement in my writing.
- Revara3mthCommentedCh 79 79. Futile struggle
- Revara3mthCommentedCh 78 78. unforeseen circumstances
- Revara4mthCommentedCh 76 76. The Final Challenge
- Revara4mthCommentedCh 5 5. Swamp monster
- Revara4mthCommentedCh 5 5. Swamp monster