That was dumb those morons can't hit mca fastballs at this stage whatsoever except for sanada and raichi maybe and what was up with Miyukis calls?

Just 2 chapters ago. Even though he's improving he's not arrogant and look at him now lol.. If you look at him you'd think he was some major League champion in his past life and not a flop who kept getting flopped and even got tips just by standing on mound

You know I don't like the idea of this dumb conversation with higher power and most of fanfics ends up doing it for no reason like it's a fantasy so just reincarnate directly no need to bring this dumb stuff man

I get it that if anybody had a chance to cross over they'd wanna be handsome but for some reason I can see this autor just being an incel who'd keep praising the appearance of the mc and make girls fall with him

I'm not sure if it has been reviewed later on but all these people crying about grammar and all are idiots. Like cmon bruh most of the fanfics can't even decide whether mc is a she or he. It's not very eloquent but completely readable

Okay I'm seriously hating him marrying sansa as well but it's not it's without benefits when ned, rob and all the main boys from stark dies except for Jon who's on wall he'd be the only eligible person to lead the North as Ned's starks Son in law so yeah it's not all bad lol

How tf did you find kraken man? I don't remember krakens being in GoT. If there were isn't it like literally having a dragon level force in water lol

Yeah bs there has only been literally two basilisks in history as mentioned so far. One was from the greatest dark wizard herpo who also happen to be the one who invented the hoxcrux method and other is Salazar so where tf did a family tradition came from? Brain dead writing

Bro what do you mean children emotions are hard to handle, you aren't a child mentally just physically so how are you having those emotions lol

Too much unnecessary stuff going on and how come Dumbledore didn't talk to him yet despite him having a Phoenix

There was nothing like that in Hogwarts I think and yeah its fine putting some stuff in but this dueling one doesn't make sense it's a not Durmstrang ffs.. That stuff happens there. Dumbledore won't allow stuff like that here even if it's snape

Bad grammar, a stupid shows off mc for no reason.. Seriously man I wanted to read a bloodline type HP fanfic although it haas a lot of chapters I'm not sure I can survive through it lol

Seriously man you don't need to insert this stupid scene of having a twin wand and blah blah every time. So cringe lol

I think they're probably looking into it to get that invisiblity cloak. If anyone remember potters are the descendants of third brother who survived death.

I mean he could have gone to that French school . Nicholas flamel is even one of their board of directors with Dumbledore help he could easily study there without any issue. Also I do hope author won't do some stupid bs of not telling him about quirell when he falls at Hogwarts cuz that way he can at least understand Voldemort was trying to manipulate him.. I'd drop it the moment that thing is kept secret from him for whatever stupid reason

Looks like our author is a complete Potter head considering how he made a new character just to make him look just as dumb as Ron and then showing off how incredible our dear "harry" is lol

Okay I'm not sure but which one is mc and is it a reincarnation story of someone going to HP world and becoming one of two boys?

I don't know if it's cuz you're scaling up and rating HP magic much higher than it is but ATM the story has become completely non sense, stale and boring for some reason lol

Yeah they're getting destroyed in next chapter lol

All these people complaining about how he didn't try to save his teammate blah blah, are you forgetting this matter is a secret even among Konoha top people so much so that kakashi who's supposed to be next hokage candidate doesn't know about it. How was he supposed to explain that he found out about it? And he's an orphan with zero backing he'd be killed just like uchiha and anyone would do same in such situation in fact that's how a realistic person would act in such situation. Also the eyes he took are from akikikho so it's not like he's particularly close to him or anything