Writing quality: 4.5 stars many songs and among them are the MC's thoughts so they force you to read the lyrics of the song, excellent spelling for me. Update stability: 5 stars Story Development: 3.5 is a slow story and there is no set goal or objective that the MC wants to achieve, except for the vulturis to accept his and his partner Rosalie's transformation into a vampire to avoid what happened to Edward and Bella in the original. World Background: 3 stars is twilight and there is not much development or expansion of said world. Character design: 2 stars. An adult woman transmigrated into the body of a child, a hypocritical MC who complains that Edwar is an invasive mind reader and emotionally and mentally manipulates the Cullens to further her own interests, without any mental development because if something bad happens to the MC begins to blame ROB and the world without accepting that her passive attitude is what causes her pain. In the end, her previous life only serves to define that she likes women, nothing more and nothing less. Another thing to mention is that Rosalie, her romantic interest, is unfaithful and marries a man when she and the MC confirm their relationship and there is no excuse that can change this fact no matter what develops there in the future. I'm on chapter 48.

That's it, thanks for passing the link, I recommend that you put the link in the synopsis or always at the end of the chapter or in the author's notes

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I also hope that Robin has a new relationship and forgets about Rosalie, it's a shame that it can't be possible because of the chapter that shows the future and I also find all this quite pointless, it would make more sense if he left Rosalie with her original destiny and alone They were friends at the time. Now they were a couple and this whole situation generated infidelity and betrayal in their relationship. The best thing about this author is that he made many of us readers love Robin.

I forgot to ask you what the discord is, the previous one is a dead link, send us the new one.

I don't trust your words, this is the third time Robin has suffered, you're not fooling me.😛

Nooooo Alice, the best girl, I liked her character in the novel. What a pity he is left with the unpleasant Rosalie. I just hope Robin never trusts Rosalie again.

And Alice wasn't Robin's girlfriend just like Rosalie? or am I the confused one?

I wanted to say how long until Alice and Robin meet.

Thanks for the chapter. Now I'm going to let 10 or 20 chapters build up so I can read the whole thing about how Robin overcame the pain and all that. What I do know now is that Rosalie became the most unpleasant character for me. The trust is already completely broken and you know the saying, he who does it once will do it again. When are we going to see Alice get together with Robin?

Does Hela get Rias pregnant? This chapter left me confused as to who is the leader of this Harem, Layla or Hela. If this becomes the norm, remove the Harem label and place or add Polygamy in its place. In this chapter Hela takes Rias's virginity, so read it at her own risk and it is very likely that all the first children will be Hela's instead of Layla's.

Are you going to post the other chapters of the current drama all at once or are you going to post it normally? Will Rosalie suffer for what she did to Robin? I also recommend that you put the following tags (dark) and (drama).

Yukino was possessed for 1 year and 3 months by an evil spirit that gave her the reputation of (b**ch). When she takes control of her body again, she has a very negative reputation at the high school she attends and her system forces her to do what he tells her or she will be possessed again.

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Will Alex be his girlfriend again? Or will he pair up with Wanda?

Is the romantic interest female or male?

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How long will this arc last? How long until the plot begins? Is there much left for romance? I wonder why these travel arcs with so many ocs are boring me and how repetitive the FF is becoming (travel, battles and rest).