Review Detail of Alejandr0 in Another Twilight fanfic

Writing quality: 4.5 stars many songs and among them are the MC's thoughts so they force you to read the lyrics of the song, excellent spelling for me. Update stability: 5 stars Story Development: 3.5 is a slow story and there is no set goal or objective that the MC wants to achieve, except for the vulturis to accept his and his partner Rosalie's transformation into a vampire to avoid what happened to Edward and Bella in the original. World Background: 3 stars is twilight and there is not much development or expansion of said world. Character design: 2 stars. An adult woman transmigrated into the body of a child, a hypocritical MC who complains that Edwar is an invasive mind reader and emotionally and mentally manipulates the Cullens to further her own interests, without any mental development because if something bad happens to the MC begins to blame ROB and the world without accepting that her passive attitude is what causes her pain. In the end, her previous life only serves to define that she likes women, nothing more and nothing less. Another thing to mention is that Rosalie, her romantic interest, is unfaithful and marries a man when she and the MC confirm their relationship and there is no excuse that can change this fact no matter what develops there in the future. I'm on chapter 48.