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    Arunaksha_Sarkar_93331yr
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    Nice try but messed up. The concept was great but execution not much. First the kingdom building part, MC mainly focus on Army Expansion. Nothing much about other sectors. The story is too fast paced everything gets done in a day or week. MC cultivation plan is not elaborate its totally vague. And the worst part is the battle. Mc is not a dragon for author he is a nuclear bomb, Mc drops from the sky and more than a Millions soldiers die on spot. I mean what the hell. Most of the battle is a one man show, his army is just for show, he is more an adventure than a king. and for author you made everything so easy for mc, just upgrading level he gets Devine blood. He kills millions by himself, it's boring you know no twist. And this emperor have one thing in mind battle battle and territory expansion.

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    Dragon Monarch System
    Urban · Dark_Bangali
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  • Arunaksha_Sarkar_9333
    Arunaksha_Sarkar_93331yr
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    I can't understand one thing is the writer's time worthless or Ours. Nearly in every chapter you get to see his full status, sometimes twice in same chapter. Writer don't you have your brain just for some point increase you write whole status window, who like to read same thing several times and also so detailed explanation about hunts and xp gain. It's a novel focus on story not numbers. Don't waste our time keep it short and simple. About the story its slow paced after reading nearly 100s of chpts my personal opinion writer is wasting words just to increase number no need for so much elaborations. Hope latter chapters are good.

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    Death Guns In Another World
    Fantasy · Nickaido
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