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DaoTDO

DaoTDO

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2023-03-10 JoinedUnited States
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  • DaoTDO
    DaoTDO7d
    Posted

    This concept isn’t for me. Some may like it, nothing against them; just my honest opinion.

    altalt
    Apocalypse - Infinite Resource System
    Fantasy · AllenWorker
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  • DaoTDO
    DaoTDO26d
    Commented

    Retracted.

    "Hmph!" The young girl quickly retrocede her hand but then stuck her tongue out at the blue cloth man.
    altalt
    I Regenerate 10,000 Times Faster
    Fantasy · RagingArtPunk
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  • DaoTDO
    DaoTDO1mth
    Commented

    2nd not 2rd.

    Chapter40-One hundred Coins! Royal Jade Liquor Pot!(2rd update, Cheer me with more Power Stones!)
    altalt
    Live Stream Treasure Hunt: I Made Profits Million Times Over
    Urban · Red_Skin_Duck
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  • DaoTDO
    DaoTDO1mth
    Commented

    Why are there names changing mid chapter

    "Hmph! What's so great about him? He's just a bit braver, that's all! I remember this loser once tried to join our basketball team and was kicked out by Bin Ge. He almost became the laughingstock of our team! Just a useless level-ten cripple, what's so impressive about that?" Gu Fanghua arrogantly sneered after taking a glance through the binoculars, though his words carried a hint of jealousy.
    altalt
    Apocalypse - Evil Shelter System
    Sci-fi · AllenWorker
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  • DaoTDO
    DaoTDO1mth
    Commented

    Monologing to myself

    Sigh this is so pathetic, monologuing to me.
    altalt
    The King of Faries is now a Demon Lord
    Fantasy · _oinkchan
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  • DaoTDO
    DaoTDO1mth
    Commented

    **August threw a side glance**

    "No worries then, I'm just glad you are okay, let's go in your mom has been crying since you were announced missing, she refused to come out of her room" August through a side glance at Alex, he felt something was off with Alex's story but didn't ask.
    altalt
    In a mage world
    Fantasy · Vee_High
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  • DaoTDO
    DaoTDO1mth
    Commented

    Suspicion’s

    Feeling Alex's suspicious towards him, the driver hurriedly explained while waving his hands"no, no, no, you must have misunderstood me, young man, it was an  honest coincidence that I met you today, just that there had been much news about the young master of the jeaga family going missing and the jeaga family had promised to reward whoever could find their child
    altalt
    In a mage world
    Fantasy · Vee_High
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  • DaoTDO
    DaoTDO3mth
    Posted

    I felt that the story didn’t flow, there was no reason to the story.

    altalt
    Erotic RPG: I am in the Game world, But My Heroines are Villainesses
    Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
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  • DaoTDO
    DaoTDO5mth
    Replied to xYunchex

    What about it was trash, i'm open to hearing your opinion and any ideas you have.

    altalt
    My Universal Dominance System: wealth and lust
    Sci-fi · DaoTDO
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