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cosmicRider1dReplied to Grrrrrrrrrtruee
As I prepared to return to Jaehaerys' side, I whispered a silent prayer to the Seven, asking for strength and guidance. For the sake of my son and for the future of our house, I would not give up. I would fight for him, just as fiercely as he had fought for us.- cosmicRider3dReplied to Kuiboe
this is a three legged dragon 😂
"It's quite fascinating, my lord." Maester Marwyn mumbled, never taking his eyes off the fire dragon, which was gorging itself on a cooked piece of lamb. "I have never heard of a dragon with four limbs." - cosmicRider5dPosted
- cosmicRider5dReplied to Master_Harrison
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oohh you sweet summer child you have no idea
It was safe to say that the group was developing extremely quickly. All of us were making tremendous progress due to how many advantages we had on our side. At this point, I doubted there was anything that could prevent them from winning the upcoming tournament. Unless their opponents had just as many cheats on their side, something that was highly unlikely. - cosmicRider5dCommented
entertain me mortal
"Well. Who's to say?" I asked back, mostly to gather my thoughts and prepare whatever was coming next. "Maybe we are just entertainment to someone else? Magic is bullshit and there's plenty of powerful beings out there. Maybe some Gods are watching us for entertainment?" - cosmicRider5dReplied to Zero_Cool_7670
🤣🤣 same reaction bro 🤣🤣
And there you have it. He just proved my point. If he wasn't this world's shounen protagonist, then I couldn't even imagine what the real one looked like. - cosmicRider6dCommented"Well, you could buy some things at my store. It would help me improve my ability. And your position as princess and ambassador could bring me a lot of new customers. But most importantly, there are also a few things I can help your world with. For the right price, of course."
- cosmicRider9dPosted
one the best Harry Potter and House of the dragon fanfic just read it with open mind I simply love it and mc character development to understand his standing and the other character of old king and queen is true to their original nature no whitewash thank you for writing this brother you don't know how I was searching for this kind of fanfic
- cosmicRider11dCommentedCh 24 Meeting between Delegates
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It's all right
This paragraph has been deleted. - cosmicRider13dReplied to Vergil_but_call_me
yeah he is blind towards his other family with his second wife
"Jaehaerys, happy nameday, my son," he greeted warmly, and I embraced the man who, despite his shortcomings as a king, had always been a loving father, albeit with a penchant for favoring my half-sister. - cosmicRider14dReplied to executionnerCh 1 Prologue 1
- cosmicRider14dCommentedCh 2 Fosterage I
- cosmicRider16dCommentedCh 15 Chapter 15.
- cosmicRider16dReplied to EvilmoonCh 15 Chapter 15.
- cosmicRider18dReplied to Oshborne
Still it's not easy because he is not shooting them with guns he is using a sword with require muscle mass and stamina to fight and he is 12 it is not possible at that age to fight several people with sword at 14 or 16 it will become be believe able 12 is little to young rest it's story still better than other gpt story and use curse wording and blood and Gore to make it feel more realistic
Ch 5 First Battlefield Experience - cosmicRider18dPosted
Great start but too much gpt and no character prospective no goal other then doing stupid things 🤦😮💨 bro you started great and with great story in mind but gpt ruined it all there no character development mc is fool I'll be not surprised in next chapter he is licking the boots of king of iron throne and why f mc will care for the iron throne if he wakes up north is free no more iron throne because there is only one king of the north who's name is stark and make him fucking brandon brother and stop making a fool out of him make him ruthless or like tywin because he is a fucking legend according to your story he will not be some ' yes sir ' type person be belongs to a ruthless aggressive era borth fighting with children of forest and ice demons so develop in that way