thinking about it, a being that is a true omnipotent existence, should not feel the concept of bored. They should be able to derive just as much joy out of popping bubbles in the bath as children do, they should also have the ability to be as indifferent and unfeeling as a rock, depending on how they want to live in that moment, as they have transcended the very concept of emotion. simply put, if he wants to enjoying mortal things is not a problem right...

This is good

chose 1st person or 3rd person, you cannot right in both, that's not how a true story teller writes, only when the inner monologue is been brought to fruition via the narrator, can you write something in 1st person, when writing in 3rd person to begin with to my knowledge.

I would do nothing, and also everything that doesn't go against my moral code, so in a sense i would simply enjoy life at a human level, without the pain of loss and inconvenience, as at that point such things become meaningless.

principality/dukedom/kingdom/empire. this is my understanding of hierarchy, but it doesn't matter, Patrick Alexander king sounds better than Patrick Alexander emperor, therefore calling himself king sounds better, not to mention if the fellow is beyond understanding, why can't he be a king instead of an emperor.

*humility*

beautiful portrayal of humanity

...i was left with a smile and a continuous slow left and right head shake after reading that. indeed, I could imagine that's how a goddess should lose her virginity.that chapter felt quite realistic compared to other r-?? chapters i have read,not to mention i believe this out does your previous version of Athena and Patrick's first time.Needless to say, you're writing style is coming along nicely like mentioned before when compared to the unedited chapters.

It bothers me, as i needed to use my brain, reading the god names, and also the last comment on this review but... I must regretfully inform you that, a God refers to a male, and goddess refers to female, if i was more immature and rash, after reading god says do this, god says do that, i would have hopped of immediately, as basically, he just has a bunch of dudes telling him to do scandalous things with woman... It's just weird and unconfutable, unless, you have that kind of fetish, then.... Good luck with that one buddy hehehe....

what happened to chapter 23?

this chapter was confusing and funny at the same time lol

writing in more detail makes the story more engaging, its like you are trying to finish the story in one chapter.

That was a good chapter, it left me with a head nod and a smiling face while looking forward to more at the end, opposed to as before when i was just nonchalant about reading this story.

This is good and satisfactory, despite how their mortals life were lead in the end, they got together like soulmates in a sense, despite the manipulation of her friend, not to mention, if they never got together, and the mc's mortal wife was faithful, it would have left a hardened taste in my mouth, with the only think i could think as an excuse to be, well, she just lost because of her weak mindset, but this version is better, only because of my mature mind nowadays, i know before it would of been hard to accept the fact this new godly wife, had a man before mc, despite her love for him at that time, but nowadays, i can see past that and understand its the mc's fault, just as much as her, and the mc's mortal wife, now that i aren't as narrow minded. Good job, it was really well done in my eyes.

also, the wife part was quite disappointing, as I was looking forwards to a god and goddess type development, it seemed to be very interesting to me. i don't mind harem, but a single female lead feels more suited, maybe another person from his world, or maybe someone relatable to the main character, these are just my thoughts written down, not suggestions, i look forward to it.

This is good, will it become another shelved or will it become great like I know it will be if updated? I've never seen this concept before, I can only say I look forward to the future.

lol, the amount of times I have read this line from those typical Chinese novels, where the author is infatuated with the mc.

what a butler, after reading this, I could only snap my fingers, smile, and shake my head while thinking of all them other young masters, only if they had such a fellow as him, but without even reading further, i predict this young man who can remain calm when the world crumbles around him, will be provoked by Patricks ability to remain calm as the realit- no existence itself crumbles

kept

i wanted to laugh and say he called him a little man, but then I remembered, everything in existences is little to this fellow...