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Confligere

Confligere

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A newbie writer, i sometimes get this strange urge to write... I think it's the dao of writing. Discord Link. https://discord.gg/2Tx6R59pQk

2023-02-14 JoinedGlobal
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  • Confligere
    Confligere10d
    Replied to Lordflash

    Indeed, i forgot the fellow is a transcended being. i applied too much human aspect to him which was indeed a wrong view point.

    Patrick and his wife remained indifferent and unreactive as the voice called out again.
    GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS
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  • Confligere
    Confligere10d
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    i just want to say, to be indifferent to anything is not a good thing, that implies something is wrong with you mentally, don't get me wrong, you should be indifferent to things like other peoples negative\ jealous\envious, and typically anything else not constructive to your characters as a person, opinions of you. in life what states a higher state of mind is someone with absolute control over their emotions, this implies calmness at all times, despite feeling all the raw emotions beneath the surface, not suppressing or ignoring them like an indifferent person would, but accept and controlling them, to be indifferent is to forsake emotion, which is against all sentient nature. I just had to point that out for if you are willing to listen, as every time i see the word indifferent attached to emotion, in which the person should not be indifferent, i feel as though, I should at least explain it, that way in the future when i see if, if you disagree with my statement, them i will be fine, and not feel bothered about doing nothing to change that, despite my growing annoyance

    Patrick and his wife remained indifferent and unreactive as the voice called out again.
    GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS
    Urban · Lordflash
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  • Confligere
    Confligere1mth
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    thinking about it, a being that is a true omnipotent existence, should not feel the concept of bored. They should be able to derive just as much joy out of popping bubbles in the bath as children do, they should also have the ability to be as indifferent and unfeeling as a rock, depending on how they want to live in that moment, as they have transcended the very concept of emotion. simply put, if he wants to enjoying mortal things is not a problem right...

    "As omnipotent and True Omnipotent beings, wouldn't watching some mortals going around in circles in some toys be tedious?" Athena asked as she drifted closer to Patrick.
    GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS
    Urban · Lordflash
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  • Confligere
    Confligere1mth
    Commented

    This is good

    Ch 4 Who Is The Fox Spirit Here?
    This Is My Planet
    Fantasy · InkVerse
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  • Confligere
    Confligere1mth
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    chose 1st person or 3rd person, you cannot right in both, that's not how a true story teller writes, only when the inner monologue is been brought to fruition via the narrator, can you write something in 1st person, when writing in 3rd person to begin with to my knowledge.

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  • Confligere
    Confligere1mth
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    I would do nothing, and also everything that doesn't go against my moral code, so in a sense i would simply enjoy life at a human level, without the pain of loss and inconvenience, as at that point such things become meaningless.

    Ch 40 Omni Queen System
    GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS
    Urban · Lordflash
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  • Confligere
    Confligere1mth
    Replied to Lordflash

    principality/dukedom/kingdom/empire. this is my understanding of hierarchy, but it doesn't matter, Patrick Alexander king sounds better than Patrick Alexander emperor, therefore calling himself king sounds better, not to mention if the fellow is beyond understanding, why can't he be a king instead of an emperor.

     As the Master of Beyond and Owner of All, I create you, Athena King, as the first Omni Queen and Goddess of Infinity."
    GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS
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  • Confligere
    Confligere1mth
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    *humility*

    Patrick rested his right hand as a pillow behind him, with his left hand rubbing and squeezing Athena's godly ass. They chuckled and laughed as they witnessed a cub going in circles, trying to bite its tail.
    GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS
    Urban · Lordflash
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  • Confligere
    Confligere1mth
    Commented

    beautiful portrayal of humanity

    Patrick rested his right hand as a pillow behind him, with his left hand rubbing and squeezing Athena's godly ass. They chuckled and laughed as they witnessed a cub going in circles, trying to bite its tail.
    GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS
    Urban · Lordflash
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  • Confligere
    Confligere1mth
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    ...i was left with a smile and a continuous slow left and right head shake after reading that. indeed, I could imagine that's how a goddess should lose her virginity.that chapter felt quite realistic compared to other r-?? chapters i have read,not to mention i believe this out does your previous version of Athena and Patrick's first time.Needless to say, you're writing style is coming along nicely like mentioned before when compared to the unedited chapters.

    "Now that's how a God loses their virginity."
    GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS
    Urban · Lordflash
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  • Confligere
    Confligere2mth
    Replied to AGodAmongMen

    It bothers me, as i needed to use my brain, reading the god names, and also the last comment on this review but... I must regretfully inform you that, a God refers to a male, and goddess refers to female, if i was more immature and rash, after reading god says do this, god says do that, i would have hopped of immediately, as basically, he just has a bunch of dudes telling him to do scandalous things with woman... It's just weird and unconfutable, unless, you have that kind of fetish, then.... Good luck with that one buddy hehehe....

    God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem
    Urban · AGodAmongMen
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  • Confligere
    Confligere2mth
    Commented

    what happened to chapter 23?

    Ch 24 Chapter 24 – Merry's Decision
    When Three Immortal Fairies Visited Earth and Met Me
    Fantasy · Author_of_Culture
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  • Confligere
    Confligere2mth
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    this chapter was confusing and funny at the same time lol

    Ch 44 Closure...and running for life...
    GOD OF SOULS
    Fantasy · Eternal_Jiminii
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  • Confligere
    Confligere2mth
    Commented

    writing in more detail makes the story more engaging, its like you are trying to finish the story in one chapter.

    Ch 18 Breaking mortal shackles(1)
    GOD OF SOULS
    Fantasy · Eternal_Jiminii
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  • Confligere
    Confligere2mth
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    That was a good chapter, it left me with a head nod and a smiling face while looking forward to more at the end, opposed to as before when i was just nonchalant about reading this story.

    Ch 17 Chapter 16: New Homes & Manager Elena
    What's so hard about cultivation?
    Fantasy · AnimeKeed
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  • Confligere
    Confligere2mth
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    This is good and satisfactory, despite how their mortals life were lead in the end, they got together like soulmates in a sense, despite the manipulation of her friend, not to mention, if they never got together, and the mc's mortal wife was faithful, it would have left a hardened taste in my mouth, with the only think i could think as an excuse to be, well, she just lost because of her weak mindset, but this version is better, only because of my mature mind nowadays, i know before it would of been hard to accept the fact this new godly wife, had a man before mc, despite her love for him at that time, but nowadays, i can see past that and understand its the mc's fault, just as much as her, and the mc's mortal wife, now that i aren't as narrow minded. Good job, it was really well done in my eyes.

    "Eliza my love, I have lived my entire mortal life dreaming of the day you might be mine. And now that you are hear I would have you as my wife and companion for all of eternity."
    Birth of a World: The ascendancy games
    Sci-fi · Billy_Bunn_5040
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  • Confligere
    Confligere2mth
    Replied to Confligere

    also, the wife part was quite disappointing, as I was looking forwards to a god and goddess type development, it seemed to be very interesting to me. i don't mind harem, but a single female lead feels more suited, maybe another person from his world, or maybe someone relatable to the main character, these are just my thoughts written down, not suggestions, i look forward to it.

    Ch 8 Necessary Conflict
    Birth of a World: The ascendancy games
    Sci-fi · Billy_Bunn_5040
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  • Confligere
    Confligere2mth
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    This is good, will it become another shelved or will it become great like I know it will be if updated? I've never seen this concept before, I can only say I look forward to the future.

    Ch 8 Necessary Conflict
    Birth of a World: The ascendancy games
    Sci-fi · Billy_Bunn_5040
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  • Confligere
    Confligere2mth
    Commented

    lol, the amount of times I have read this line from those typical Chinese novels, where the author is infatuated with the mc.

    "OMG, he is so handsome, look at his silver hair, is he even human?"
    GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS
    Urban · Lordflash
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  • Confligere
    Confligere2mth
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    what a butler, after reading this, I could only snap my fingers, smile, and shake my head while thinking of all them other young masters, only if they had such a fellow as him, but without even reading further, i predict this young man who can remain calm when the world crumbles around him, will be provoked by Patricks ability to remain calm as the realit- no existence itself crumbles

    The butler maintained a calm expression as he replied, "I suggest we don't count our chickens before they hatch, Sir Damon. Your interest in Athena Watson might not be reciprocated. And if you start rewarding now before getting your expected result, then not only will we be losing face, but we will also be rewarding it."
    GOD OF ALL SYSTEMS
    Urban · Lordflash
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