Please stop describing Naruto's tone of voice after every time he speaks.

I had my money on secret love child between Snape and Lily from an A U

Is Alexander not mad or upset with Rindo for her vote to remove the chairman ?

I'm enjoying the story so far, but please don't make Gojo a slave to Yahikos' ideals or things like that. it would fit Gojo Satoru at all.

Okay, Alan's demeanor makes a lot more sense now. I just realized that his brothers, Christian and Braxton are the 2 characters in the Ben Affleck movie the Accountant.

ok, so help me understand. Orion has absorbed the magic from several magical creatures, including a troll, unicorn, and a dragon. But he is still just barely level 2 even though he trains like 12+ hours a day? How is Nick so many levels ahead by only doing some dark rituals? Also, isn't Orion still absorbing magic passively just by being at Hogwarts?

hard to understand. gojo is called like 7 different names in the first chapter. Sometimes, multiple different names in the same sentence of dialog by one person, and has some weird idioms that make no sense.

The story so far is good, with only 8 chapters so far. the writing quality is also good, with no major grammatical errors like some stories. the plot seems to have a lot of room to develop, and I hope the author continues to upload chapters! The only thing that hurt the rating is that we don't know what the MC looks like or what his background is in this new life is yet.

thanks for the chapter, but can you please not use so many ------ to break up the chapter. I listen to your book using the audio feature on webnovel, and it really kills the listening experience.

I'm enjoying the story so far, but I can't think of the reason he needs a nano suit. it just seems unnecessary to me.

I dont know if it was to hit a word count target, but you spent way too much time describing their voice and gazes

if he has been living with Charlie in forks and is a senior already, how can he be a new student?