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Ethos_3hCommentedit would better if the author was the narrator thus making your story more diverse but if everything is from Akeshi point of view it makes the story focus on him more
"You never know what might happen in life." That was my father's motto.- Ethos_8hCommented
power??? it sounds so corny why not say technique or something
"It is similar to spatial treasure but it is not a spatial treasure. It's actually a shrinking bag." Priscilla said as she used her power to open up a little bit. He saw the things he sent inside were reduced into small sizes. - Ethos_4dReplied to Kaiju_TSlaymerCh 378 Go After Her Body
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pffffft
Reflecting on this, Ryan couldn't help but mock himself inwardly."What luck! I become a firefighter and kick the bucket on the first day!" - Ethos_8dCommented
*English is my third language
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can you please you please use alternatives *Transfer to the host / transfer to Aryan the first discipline it sounds more... appealing
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*present tense she's still alive right
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so you're an orphan
Doctors told me it was impossible to cure her. I already lost my mom and dad. So I did not want to lose my sister. I already tried to talk to many other doctors but unfortunately, everyone has the same answer: they won't be able to cure the spirit Malfunction. - Ethos_8dReplied to Small_Otaku
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I see.. now i have let it marinate for 3 months and I might find hundred chapters or more
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My reviews are always biased and honest.. trash is trash and art is art, this novel is a hidden gem trust but only few things trouble me firstly everything feels rushed.. not the novel itself but the grammar.. first impression is everything.. the story reels you in but the grammar 🏌️ I like how not everything is about sex, this novel is great for all ages [if i may shamelessly make this request.. many of your novels are about systems and I need some guidance, can you please review my novel THE INCEPTION OF MAYHEM and tell me if the structure of the system is good, I have no experience towards fantasy novels thank you ] Another thing the author could do is to read the novel him/herself and see it from his/ her perspective and spend a few hours to edit them while it's still early I have read a lot of novels so trust me on this statement, the novel itself is a growing type it's not really generic therefore it does not lack essence it's unique it's own way i have read all the novels of JosieGan, not all authors are perfect but that guy created countless novels based on the same concept and plot all of them may differ in terms of MC's but they are all the same thing [sex sex sex, incest incest ] all of them This author created countless novels also but they are all different in every way 😔 they might not be the best but they are all decent so I might donate my power stones now and then
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*felt
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how does each grade differ in terms of life span
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can you please edit your chapters before posting, the grammar almost gave me a headache
Saying all of this, Sam already came in front of Aryan and sat down in the bed while giving him the tray full of food. On the other hand Aryan, after getting all this information, becomes fully surprised because he does not know Sam who tells him that he is also a teacher at the Golden Dawn Academy. - Ethos_8dCommented
what he meant is
I will make sure that from now on you will not have the capability to walk or try to talk to anyone." - Ethos_8dReplied to The_Procrastinator
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That's better I don't want him to heartless
John couldn't help but smile. His feelings for Coco were complicated. - Ethos_8dCommented
"Please continue " suggested Raven
Running everything back in his mind Raven tried to make sure that he just saw things correctly. The effeminate hero of the people with twigs for hands and only a barebone fighting body, was all alone in his room looking at a small portrait of someone while flagging his dick naked. Not only that, the portrait was that of a girl from their party, more specifically the elf Archer, Mel. - Ethos_8dCommented
Aphrodite does not belong to the streets..she runs the streets,
"Fine, I…" Pressing her hand against her chest, the goddess puffed her breasts with a drawn breath. "Aphrodite, grants you the gift of seduction. A power so perverse and potent that no woman–be she promised to another man, engaged, even bearing a seed of the future, or sharing the lineage could ever resist your charm." - Ethos_8dCommented
imagine if Tang Yin did the same
Su Rou was startled when Tang Xiao held her head, but she was even more shocked when he unrestrainedly fucked her mouth, and his dick expanded rapidly to fill her entire mouth. After all, she was used to being in control, but he restrained her strongly, rendering her unable to move. 'Shit! What happened to him? He was like an innocent guy before, but he suddenly turned wild.'