Review Detail of Ethos_ in My students will become the strongest.

My reviews are always biased and honest.. trash is trash and art is art, this novel is a hidden gem trust but only few things trouble me firstly everything feels rushed.. not the novel itself but the grammar.. first impression is everything.. the story reels you in but the grammar 🏌️ I like how not everything is about sex, this novel is great for all ages [if i may shamelessly make this request.. many of your novels are about systems and I need some guidance, can you please review my novel THE INCEPTION OF MAYHEM and tell me if the structure of the system is good, I have no experience towards fantasy novels thank you ] Another thing the author could do is to read the novel him/herself and see it from his/ her perspective and spend a few hours to edit them while it's still early I have read a lot of novels so trust me on this statement, the novel itself is a growing type it's not really generic therefore it does not lack essence it's unique it's own way i have read all the novels of JosieGan, not all authors are perfect but that guy created countless novels based on the same concept and plot all of them may differ in terms of MC's but they are all the same thing [sex sex sex, incest incest ] all of them This author created countless novels also but they are all different in every way 😔 they might not be the best but they are all decent so I might donate my power stones now and then