This take is why half the authors on the platform like using r*pe as a plot device, it really isn’t that great

The novel sometimes feels like the chapters are out of order or missing. MC likes “hunting for prey” to sleep with and harasses women

…prey?

No you

You can make any sort of subjective argument like that. You surely have read stories with one FL and they have no depth too

Touched a bit in the head eh

I must have underestimated the capabilities of the organization then for sure. I do dislike not going for the perfect clear though…

How do I start….the story was magnificent. The comedy was there, the type of magic is quite unique. The involvement of the magic is THERE, you feel it, how raw the idea the power of emotive magic is and how it gives and takes. The side characters that are prevalent, the actual MC of the game and the three main heroines all have good things about them. They feel real. However, chapter 71-73 is where I lost it, and this part will have spoilers. The mark on his arm that he has no information about Initially belongs to an ancient terrorist type organization (as far as I know, I won’t be reading further). Furthermore, his innate trait is foresight that basically gives him visions of the game’s major events so that he can stop them. The chancellor that he has become involved with is one of the strongest of humanity, has a feral dislike of the organization and purposefully brought him close so that she could keep watch on him. All is fine so far. Chapter 71 is when a prison break happens and several key people escape and several students die, and it’s because the MC allows for it to happen because he wants to plant an insider into that organization. At this point you might say, “ok? So what?” And I’d disagree. Suddenly the novel takes on a pointless antihero theme where the MC loses his intelligence. For this prison break mission, he was going to rank up to the next rank FINALLY; the dude has been struggling immensely. Tell me if the below situation wouldn’t just simply be better: MC goes to the chancellor and admits about having foresight; he tells her about the potential prison break (and this topic would inevitably bring up asking about when else his foresight as activated) which then allows you to bring up the suggestion of allowing some to ”escape” from the prison under the chancellor’s awareness. The main person that needs to die is the aunt of one of the female leads which is food for thought because it should be her escape that triggers mission failure specifically. I personally wouldn’t go for the fake escape to plant someone in this organization, each bit the calamities awaken, the more deranged they will act. Thus, acquiring the assistance of the chancellor to perfectly clear this mission seems to be far and above a better choice than whatever nonsense plan the mc came up with after huffing paint.

This is the first time in this novel where I felt something was forced. It feels like the MC took a major drop in IQ just to seem mysterious and mature. He loses out on mission benefits; allows several people to die, all because he’s afraid of speaking to the chancellor. He’s not afraid of potentially getting nothing out of the teacher he manipulated; the teacher that is infinitely weaker than the chancellor and much less useful to the organization. Hopefully the trend of the mc becoming borderline handicapped doesn’t continue.

A bit of a let down; purposely trying to make his own moves, when it would be multiple times more efficient and effective to let the chancellor in on what’s happening instead of this disaster of a plan~ Hopefully he doesn’t make this a trend, it’s embarrassing

This comment is nearly as bad as the review LMAO

I’m sorry but this review is absolutely trash and it says a lot about you as a person We don’t know why people are joining an organization that’s meant to kill people? It’s been the same even in our world…. Greed, revenge, religious dogma etc. Leave a nation and just go live somewhere else happy go lucky to avoid the criminal organization? Yay! What a great and kind suggestion!

Was happy that we finally had a yuri novel, but it has futa so….

You know that morality isn’t a worldly thing right? Slaves still exist in this world; some people think it’s right, other people don’t care, and some thing it’s wrong.

Gonna go to Home Depot and buy a rope at this point

Author, why is Drake mentally ill

Sure, but he’s also been talking to Ben for how long now? Yeah sure he won’t be 100% cured of being a social idiot, but we can grow as a species can’t we? And it’s not like in highschool where it would be an acquaintance or stranger messing with you, it’s someone he clearly cares about; so why’d he regress 40 years mentally

One of the other novels is literally brothel manager and you expect this review to be believable?

He can say we, there’s more than just one of them. I prefer massively OP compared to the author making mc swallow nails, pour lemon juice into his eyes, prying finger nails off for each small upgrade

I fear you haven’t ran into enough of the anti yuri fan base; there’s a famous guy around with name “yuri is ntr”, they have to be afraid of they go that far, no?