SuCiDe_shit
Writing a novel"What's Beyond Death "please give it a look
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SuCiDe_shit21hPostedIt started well, but there is no difference between his speech to others and his thoughts which makes it confusing....The MC doesn't seem to think logically who in the world threatens the principal who is No.1 assassin without plot armour he would have been died a hundred times . . . Not to mention the fourth wall breaking which is a bonus
- SuCiDe_shit21hCommented
You did all that and Your Novel is a Hit....
A place I would love not go to, but the way I designed the novel even if I don't go to STAR I'll still be doomed, because, I gave the protagonist quite the plot armor you see, grandson of the sword saint, broken superpower, op items and so on and so on. - SuCiDe_shit1dReplied to AshlesSmiley
Yep
"Man, I look like a fucking tubelight," I mumbled as I looked at my body. Despite my grumbling, it looked really cool. - SuCiDe_shit1dCommented
Why did his father did so much for the MC... .. . Don't tell it's some stupid plot of MC mother being a goddess came to lower world fell in love bla... bla... bla
"So, the Dark North Queen is actually my fiancée..." Li Changsheng shook his head and laughed, "Father, father, you really left me a rich inheritance." - SuCiDe_shit1dReplied to
yep
"Man, I look like a fucking tubelight," I mumbled as I looked at my body. Despite my grumbling, it looked really cool. - SuCiDe_shit5dCommentedWeak! He had to train his body properly later.
- SuCiDe_shit8dReplied to Greeninja4448
Definitely.... didn't you see the change in font , that's basically foreshadowing
Hmph, as if I would ever read something that long for a stupid game. Let's just get this over with. - SuCiDe_shit12dCommented
You don't have to pin point it though....
"It seems so. I mean, look at you boy! You look like you got mauled by a pack of lions or something! Don't be sad, this is just your limit. Some people were just born to never achieve anything," the old man said in contempt. - SuCiDe_shit13dCommentedCh 57 [Weapon Selection] [5]
- SuCiDe_shit15dCommented
Shouldn't it be " I died, Hooray! "
'I died. Fuck!' - SuCiDe_shit15dCommented"So big!"
- SuCiDe_shit15dCommented
I read that as "a pus*y system"
A Pushy System - SuCiDe_shit18dCommentedmade most of It myself cool right?)
- SuCiDe_shit18dCommented
That's a cringy a** name ngl
Hey guys consider reading my new work , Steel and Sorrow: Rise of the mercenary king - SuCiDe_shit18dReplied to SuCiDe_shit