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Writing a novel"What's Beyond Death "please give it a look
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SuCiDe_shit4dCommentedCh 75 Partial Success?- SuCiDe_shit11dCommentedㅅㅅㄲㄲ (1)
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The entire volume 1 is great 👍👍....though there are some chapters which are boring 😔 Now the ending of volume 1 is really great in the volume 1 we have confusion in his future steps like will he run away or will he fight , who is controlling him etc... Now there is a fixed path for him ..Looking forward for volume 2
Please leave a review for the entirety of volume 1. I want to know what you thought about the entire volume, as that will help me improve when it comes to volume 2. - SuCiDe_shit16dCommentedCh 89 Title at the End
- SuCiDe_shit17dReplied to shiro_WD_emiya
Dude just imagine you have a childhood friend and he spoke about a game and after 30 + years you remember every single detail of that game.....
"A childhood friend of mine gifted me this game when I was younger, and if my memory serves me correctly, Jareth is the game's starting villain." (Jareth) - SuCiDe_shit19dPosted
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That's a long a** title
Chapter 4: The flower that once bloomed now lies withered and rotten, a reminder of what once was and what will never be again. (2) - SuCiDe_shit23dReplied to Okojus
Yeah what should Zephyr do then .... Praise him saying " Young Master I am defeated even though I am God " Things like these makes readers hate MC
Also, while he didn't care about being manipulated for now, William swore to himself that he'd make Zephyr pay for the humiliating defeat he suffered today. - SuCiDe_shit26dCommentedShe knew I didn't like light, but it didn't mean I disliked it in the place of darkness.
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What about the date man???
"Yes, I'm not feeling well, so I'll go to bed early. I'll be in my room for two or three days." - SuCiDe_shit28dCommented
Yeah ....and there is a major weakness for MC ' His Family'
He was already pretending to be the 1st Seat of the Primordials, if they were to find out, then things would get messy. - SuCiDe_shit28dCommented
Dude I don't fuc*ing remember what I had for lunch yesterday How the hell do you remember the game details and events??? . . . It's not particularly bad though🤷
"A childhood friend of mine gifted me this game when I was younger, and if my memory serves me correctly, Jareth is the game's starting villain." (Jareth)