Thank you. I know I'm being shameless, but can you tell me what you think about my story once you're done reading it?

Probably... but you amaze me. Of course I'm grateful, but you still reading this story?

If you like my comment, then how about you give my story a chance?It's still rough around the edges and it only has 29 chapters but you won't lose anything reading it. So please...

So, did I fail?

Just the first letter then. Please.

Why ?

Mind telling me what platform?

My only problem is the use of proper punctuations. Aside from that, it has potential... Too early to tell how this story will unfold so I probably go back if this story has more chapters.

I like the writing style. I'm not a genius but I can at least recognize that the grammar is almost perfect. Although, I think you should split some long paragraph into two to make it shorter and easier to read.I like the pace of the story either just giving me enough excitement to continue.I wish you upload more frequently.The first chap is kinda long tho, but it's manageable

Can't wait for the segs part

Ohoho. We all know where this is going

Just be a man. come on.

Just go with the flow man.

I liked the story. It kinda surprise me because author told me it's romance. I didn't know it's dark romance.

It's a good read however there is something I can't explain that it lacks.Maybe the writing style? I dunno myself.It has nice concept but maybe the delivery is bad.As for the update stability, the author ain't uploading for four months now so that's negative.All in all, the author said himself that he's a newbie so maybe in the future he will improve and make this story better

It's just a small humor. He's basically breaking the 4th wall talking to me.I'm sorry for the confusion.

Right. The chapter seems so short that's why I need more.