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Moaz_Khaled7dReplied to Cedric_7512Ch 10 The second invasion III- Moaz_Khaled7dCommented
Plz don’t make the fight like cannon it was honestly embarrassing watching gremmy “fight” with zaraki especially the clone part while smart in cannon because he of his limited imagination then its going to be both redundant and just plain unnecessary here other than to simply replay what happened in bleach tybw
Ch 10 The second invasion III - Moaz_Khaled1mthReplied to Shinosuke
No
"But you are manipulating him. He doesn't know you've had him watched by multiple people for years. He doesn't know that his so-called family is more loyal to you than they'll ever be to him. He doesn't know you'd never give him a choice, he has to be with you." - Moaz_Khaled2mthCommented
Yes it improved I like your story and as long as he doesn’t pretend he’s weak the I will not stop reading it Also I would like it to continue onto other world after you are done with tensura
Ch 32 I Want Answers!!!!detailTensura: Primordial Silver to True Dragon - The Tale of Rimuru TempestAnime & Comics · God_RimuruTempest - Moaz_Khaled3mthCommented
Correct me if I am wrong but daemons while spiritual life forms they can stay indefinitely in the main cardinal world by getting a name and evolving into a demon peer there by making there temporary physical bodies permanent let alone evolving into a true demon lord he shouldn’t worry about having to go back and can go back and forth at will like diablo. Btw I first got confused when he evolved into a demon peer in the demon world (forgot its name) while having no material body but I just took your explanation as him having no limit but if that is intentional and he’s gonna keep being forced to go back for the plot or some other nonsense despite becoming a true demon lord there by being able to freely have a material body due to the evolution then please let me know
This paragraph has been deleted.detailTensura: Primordial Silver to True Dragon - The Tale of Rimuru TempestAnime & Comics · God_RimuruTempest - Moaz_Khaled4mthCommented
+1
• Emma Frost - Moaz_Khaled4mthCommentedCh 53 Guess who's back
- Moaz_Khaled6mthCommented
that wouldn’t be a battle more of aizen bored so he goes to bully satoru especially tybw aizen fully released
Forgive me you guys, I don't know if I'd be able to post a chapter today. My mind is filled with an idea of a ff that is giving me nightgmares. Like for the past two days I've not been able to sleep without dreaming of Aizen battling Gojo Satoru in my mind! - Moaz_Khaled6mthCommentedCh 62 Shūen no Kyōkai
- Moaz_Khaled6mthCommented
Plz don’t make it dialogue
Yamamoto: "I will now continue. Lieutenant of Squad 3, Rojuro Ohtoribashi. Captain of Squad 5, Shinji Hirako. Captain of Squad 7, Love Aikawa. The three I just named will head to the site. The Captain of Squad 2, Yoruichi Shihoin will stand by for further orders. Captain of Squad 6, Ginrei Kuchiki, Captain of Squad 8 Shunsui Kyoraku, Captain of Squad 13, Jushiro Ukitake, Captain of Squad 3, Toji Fushiguro. The four of you will guard the Seireitei. - Moaz_Khaled6mthCommented
1 You have good reasons to keep both
This paragraph has been deleted. - Moaz_Khaled6mthCommentedCh 59 Teacher and Disciple
- Moaz_Khaled7mthCommented
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Yes
Clementine(Vote) - Moaz_Khaled8mthCommented
Honestly i want this mc to die and reincarnate into a cockroach in a magic less world were there is no chance of evolution with an immortality curse so he would be stuck there. This is the worst mc i have read about so far. At this point i am only checking every now and then to see if there are any improvements only to get even more disappointed because i actually liked this story till the naruto arc.
Ch 92 Little Punishment