Lol I wish making money was really that easy, I think you could definitely make the story more detailed, but so far it's really good. Can't wait to read more [img=update]
Hi, love this story, very interesting plot, love the FL and that she's got that 'I'm no push over' attitude can totally relate. Keep up the good work :) [img=recommend]
System: Vampire Bloodline - The Vampire's True Desires
Love the story, kind of annoying that your redoing it but I get it, the opinion that matters most is the authors respect, can't wait for you to publish again, would highly recommend this novel to anyone looking for a good read. Again can't wait for an update [img=recommend]
Love love love your story, very interesting and funny, continue writing and can't wait to read more. Would highly recommend this story to others
Yours truly SWBWG
I plopped down into a seat in the front row, slowly other students started piling in. Not really interested in listening to people complain about their summer vacations I pulled out my book 'The Fountain Head' by Ayn Rand.
I guess you could say it all started in October, that's when she got her first one, But I think it started before that. Let's go back to the first day, that's when it began for me.
I hope you guy's enjoy reading this as much as I did writing this, please feel free to leave a review and let me know your thoughts on my writing, if you have any ideas or constructive criticism I welcome them with open arms.