i love this story, but i really can't afford to keep reading. Please, anybody tell me of a site or something where i can read for free.

anything that moves is a snack, anything that doesnt move is a dead snack

you said you're working to fix any grammatical errors, when will that start?

i always wonder why they dont use a different plot device instead of a system, why not an alien language that he suddenly begins understanding and the information rushes into his head etc. i just feel like an unknown creature giving him a game system doesnt fit naturally

or if it was phrased that she died in childbirth