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Jeffrey_Lassiter15hCommentedif people have a problem then they should go read a book written by a professional and not fanfiction. i thought that it is common sense that fanfics don't have to have perfect grammer.
Say whatever you want to me, but I have one demand. Come with a solution. I dont wanna hear ya'll yapping about "your grammar is so bad" "this isnt engaging"- Jeffrey_Lassiter9dCommented
I unfortunately can't support you on patron due to financial situations but I'll vote a stone to show i really enjoys this story
I've already updated this story on my Patreon platform up to chapter 37. If you're interested in reading ahead, you can find it there. I'll be updating it daily if people wanted it. Patreon supporters receive chapters in advance at patreon.com/THE_TRANSLATOR498. - Jeffrey_Lassiter16dCommented
no. as a fanfic it is well within acceptable grammer because there are many that are way worse. some being so bad that I just stop reading after a few paragraphs
Is my grammar that bad? According to some feedback it is very difficult to read and breaks the flow of story. - Jeffrey_Lassiter1mthCommented
garchomp is good but for a ground type specialist i think other pokemon are better also a sandstorm setter is a must.
I feel like I'm missing something here but it just doesn't seem that useful for monotype?? At least in the scenario that we are in real-life Pokemon where we don't take turns or have move limits. The type coverage it gives is just unneeded when other Pokemon cover more typings offensively and defensively. - Jeffrey_Lassiter2mthCommented
the irony that fuinjutsu is the only ninja art hat the otosuki have no defence or immunity to.
"Remember, Ay, Fuinjutsu is the most complex and difficult art to master. It is believed that Fuinjutsu arts even predate Ninjutsu itself. But once someone masters fuinjutsu, they can be the most dangerous adversaries out there. Ashina Uzumaki was one of the best examples of what a fuin master was capable of. He took down a total of seven Kage-level Shinobi before perishing, and that man was not in his prime back then, and if rumours were to be believed, he was over two hundred years old at the time of his death, and each one of those who he killed was an expert in their own field. Even under the combined siege of Kumo, Iwa, and Kiri, the Uzumaki stood strong. If not for the Leaf's betrayal and the Uzumaki being stabbed in the back, they would still be standing strong," the old man added, sharing a historical perspective on the potency of Fuinjutsu and its profound impact on the course of events. - Jeffrey_Lassiter3mthReplied to Andrey_M
this is a normal thing for Asian parents from what I've seen.
"I know you can do it. In my professional opinion as your mentor, I think you'll crash and burn, you are utterly incompetent and you'll be lucky if you can learn even the first form - Jeffrey_Lassiter3mthReplied to InsertaGoodName
i used to know one that has skin cancer.
Her complexion was ghastly pale, but not sickly. It was as if she had never seen the sun in her life. - Jeffrey_Lassiter4mthCommented
It always bothered me that the skyrim fan base just casually ignored the fact that the auger hints that he is the reason why arcano knows how to even tap into the orb.
I turn to him with a shrug "Fucker gave out information to Ancano while he knew damn well what his plans were" My eyes narrowed and I let out a rage-filled growl "I do not abide traitors." - Jeffrey_Lassiter4mthCommented
Funny enough even George Lucas himself doesn't even know what to call their species
Since I have no idea what kriffing species she and Yoda are. - Jeffrey_Lassiter4mthCommented
ya know this fits the hidden cloud well
"Make their new generation fear the hidden cloud." - Jeffrey_Lassiter4mthReplied to Mazigh_Guirat
suna didn't become allies of konoha till after it lost the 3rd Shinobi war.
The fall of Uzushiohakure was now but assured. The might of the four shinobi villages was far too great for them to fight against. With them also keeping Konoha busy they could not expect any reinforcements. - Jeffrey_Lassiter4mthCommented
Ah truck-kun was busy so he has his cat pay the poor protag a visit.
Waking up disoriented, with his head throbbing in pain, Will found himself looking around, unsure of where he was. This rustic place didn't resemble his room at all. The last thing he remembered was searching for a game to play when a cat had entered his room with a grenade in its mouth. - Jeffrey_Lassiter5mthCommented
hmm different from me. I have to have a good tank when I do any pokemon playthrough. 2 attackers one spec and one physical.
Tyranitars are one of the rare heavy Pokemon I Like. As I generally dislike tank-type builds. - Jeffrey_Lassiter5mthReplied to FlamingPoverty
yea they could do that but in order to balance the game hp stats will need a massive increase along with all the defence stats which will make battles a lot longer.
"poison gas" - Jeffrey_Lassiter6mthCommented
Aerodactyl is like "I did not sign up for this!"
"Vulcan set!" I called calmly as I tossed the ball out and Roxanne immediately turned tense as Vulcan made it know EXACTLY who was top dog here at his appearance. "EEENNN!" it roared and a wave of oppressive heat flooded the field while the Aerodactyl dropped any arrogance it had and gave Roxanne a look that screamed "Are you fucking kidding me!?". Vulcan was not happy at all after having watched the battle to this point and it was about to make it's displeasure known. Flames flickered to life around it as the hard stone floor melted beneath it's feet.- - Jeffrey_Lassiter7mthCommented
yea glad i read the chapter titles. i can understand posting a large amount on patron ahead then eventually putting it here by patron only is not the way to go if you want enough good will for someone to pay patron. It just seems like your only doing this for money.
Ch 15 This fanfic will only be posted on my pa treon. Just $7 to join - Jeffrey_Lassiter8mthCommented
coffee is only good when drowned in sugar and cream, but then that ruins the point of a beverage. if it needs a lot to even be good then it's not good. coffee drinkers are blinded by the caffeine
He nods vigorously "Truly, the tea drinkers will use any means to suppress the one true beverage." - Jeffrey_Lassiter9mthCommented
so they want second and at first glace may seem weaker but in reality if you have a lot of anime knowledge then becoming op is easy with only a few wishes
Choice 2: You are reborn with five wishes and keep half of your memories and knowledge. You cannot use a wish to gain a System. - Jeffrey_Lassiter10mthCommented
I actually prefer how the eng dub voice actor sounds over the Japanese one
Calming I hear the man followed by a woman's soothing voice. I Immediately recognize the voice as the English dub for Goku aka. Sean Schemmel.