Amazing stories but u have to work on your synopsis and give a better story development, Setting is good but a lot are required to be done as you continue writing. Wish you well Young Ms expect to see more from you as we continue reading and pinpointing where you need improvement.

Thank you so much I would put that into consideration

Check this out guys and give a feedback

just try to give ya comment on this after reading

Keep your good works. The writing is impressive but you need a lot of improvement in some areas, hope to see that soon and all the best bri

"He was still able to retain his cultivation base, despite not cultivating". We get to know about that in our next chapters

I will try to improve and deliver the best. thanks

thanks bri

The main show is about to begin

Want that? send ya discord link so we could chat

A lot was done in here but u gotta put more effort. Love the plot and character/setting. But your punctuation is to be looked into, so as to enable a flow as it's being read through

Love the start. Bri super amazing but u need to gather, your plot well and give a captivating stuff to we readers. Just keep on writing and dm me to make comment on all ya chapters

Love the start but a small correction of punctuation marks are needed

You really have a sense of humor

Ima just say the Author did her best plotting the novel. If i may say, it's incredible and highly recommendable to romance book fans. Super Bada*s for lovers

Yea

Dont get u

Elder Lin his teacher

fine, working on that

thanks bri