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The plot are awesome but a lot has to be done in the aspect of correct punctuation and story development, as it will help the readers out there to have a clear understanding of what you are trying to present to them without hitchs. I would love if you are contracted soon and have a content editor to help you out or using grammerly can help also

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Thank you so much I would put that into consideration