its not too late rewrite this man

leviathan storm so far is preety useless ngl

storm of water dragon probably gonna miss like leviathan storm did

idk whether it is oriel or its his soulcus if it is his dragon soul how is he having 2 different people controlling his isn't his soul that of a dragon there's no mention of another one, which probably means it's oriel

imma be honest I feel much more excited seeing a demon Arnoldthan a dragon lord King Arnold penston

Victoria was heavily implied to use fire and the whole memory thing saying not to trust her than their is her past.And the fact that Arsonria means fire than also that she keeps on sleeping and it might also make sense on how Arnold joins the demons because their queen is right next to him

not an isekai :/ no harem demon holy sword hero or perverted main character and top of that there are no special powers that main characters have only ther other have it so yeahh

my story is going to be trash I'll tell you this right here this will be the first proper book i write so just remember that I by no means am telling you to read it is mainly something I am doing motivated by fun

I am open to criticism and will be rewriting chapters if I think it's a reasonable one so please do be free to voice your thought I always love to improve

ai ye I don't wanna pirate the novel m enjoying it here

so revolution m guessing or something

yea preety much

i like it simply cuz main character is not cringey and acts like a real Pearson and above all is a demon who acts like a dam demon not some hero

best of luck from discord

amazing story so far ruizan i look forward to seeing how you do

also i Highly recommended you never reveal your identity or anything related to it

aside from the fact this is impossible realistically i think it's a good concept just make it in a fictionous world though in a country not as diverse as india

don't use Jesus Christ and stuff like angels it ruins immersion bruh

i love it I've been waiting so long for a book with this concept i cant wait to see how this develops

i wanna see an invasion of europe hopefully