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Story started very strong, ignore the others complaining about “nerfed abilities” because it is important for driving the beginning of the plot and the MC is very powerful (comparable to the avengers when he meets them). Unfortunately, around chapter ~20ish the author gave up and let’s ChatGPT write the story, all the chapters afterwards are total brainrot. I assume this is to more easily sell chapters but idk it’s a bummer. Still giving 4 stars because I enjoyed the beginning a lot, I’ll just pretend this was dropped after 20 and move on.
I’m very impressed so far. I give huge compliments to the author for having the balls to actually affect the story. So many mythology fanfics have a very powerful MC who ends up inconsequential to the plot, but you have done an excellent job of avoiding that and making an actually interesting Olympian god story. I know writing a story like this is very difficult so I’m rooting for ya! can’t wait for more!
Not really a fan of the chatGPT flavor. A few tips, to disguise it and improve the flow: in your prompt you can specify a high school reading level. At first it sounds stupid, but this makes it use less obscure adjectives and wacky conjunctions. You can also just prompt to use less adjectives and simpler sentences. You can also ask for different pacing in the prompt. You can paste the passage and ask for faster pacing during action segments etc. basically the only thing you shouldn’t do is paste your chapter and ask for something simple like “improve grammar”, because then the whole thing tastes like gpt.
This is definitely a weird one, not sure if the author copy pasted from another author or if this is a fanfic of another fanfic called rejected nephilem or something. Another weird thing is that he has his entire harem at the first chapter, it’s like we skipped the entire season and are starting at the last episode. Not sure why the author skipped the harem building part of the harem story. Last weird thing is that all the characters names are nonsense like the result of blindly smashing the keyboard. In conclusion: idk? I’m interested to know if other readers found it weird and bland or if I’m just outgrowing dxd fanfics, it’s been a while since I actually enjoyed one
The writing quality is pretty good, but the plot is exceedingly slow and boring in my opinion. Ended up dropping because the author decided to develop romance with prepubescent MC rather than waiting for the academy or afterwards. I know the MC is reincarnated but kurenai and others aren’t so it was really distasteful.
It’s bad, I think the author doesn’t understand villain novels. The “villain” MC in this novel, instead of cutting off the “protagonist” with schemes and conspiracies from the dark, decides to commit violent and psychotic crime in full view of the public. This alienates every sane character and makes him look disturbed, but the heroine somehow swoons over this. I won’t mention the awkward writing because I think it may be a translation or ai, but this plot is like drinking poison. I like to read trash novels but I expect trash of a certain quality. I got tricked by the villain tag…