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A_Beautiful_Hart1mthCommentedYou should really cut back on your author notes. They break immersion, and they also spoil the novel. Please stop, you have great writing, don't ruin it.
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Are we sure they still are 'just' journalists ?
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Any reward for this one ?
Go to work at The Front Lineevery day (At least 5/7 days to receive rewards.) (1/5 Days) - A_Beautiful_Hart1mthCommented
I'm actually not bored. The thing that does it the most to me are the notes you place that totally break the 4th wall and the immersion. But that's just a slow start, definitely okay. What kind of action-crazed audience did you have to cater before to be conditioned like that to think you need to appease people when you just take time to settle your universe ?
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What is a Vampire Cross ? A Christian Cross ? Some special item ?
[You obtained a Vampire cross.] - A_Beautiful_Hart1mthCommented
Such diplomacy, finesse, cunning and stealthiness. Really, when you got a level playing field (or a losing one), when you want something, you don't make demands, you do trades and bets and stack the deck however possible beforehand.
"HIRUZEN! GIVE THE GIRL TO MY ROOT!" - A_Beautiful_Hart1mthCommented
Sounds a lot like Draco Malfoy.
"You will regret this Hiruzen!" - A_Beautiful_Hart1mthReplied to Lerynia
Thanks, I had just googled something real quick for the number. Considering how MC just rents a small flat and only needs to eat and pay bills, clearly a whole salary is way more than enough, not just barely enough to get by as depicted.
Another thing that I noticed is that my player account has been approved, and I have received around 7,500 USD in my bank account, which is neither a small nor too large amount, just enough to pay for a month's expenses. - A_Beautiful_Hart1mthCommented
No ? You could be best friends too. Or rivals. You just have a lifelong relationship, go wild with it dudes.
Leaf's eyes narrowed as she spoke, "Emmet, I'm telling you this Aura bond is for life. Don't you get it? We're basically married. And we're only 15!" - A_Beautiful_Hart1mthCommented
That's the way to go for building strength and endurance, albeit to the detriment of agility..
"Pidgey, keep dodging! Stay agile!" Emmet shouted, his eyes laser-focused on the aerial ballet that was unfolding. - A_Beautiful_Hart2mthCommented
You succeded in portaying Danzo as an even more untrusting petulant man child than he was in the show. I don't know what to think of this achievement though..
"Hiruzen, you will regret this," he uttered with a chilling assurance, the ominous words hanging in the air. The statement carried a weight of potential consequences, hinting at the tumultuous times that might unfold in the wake of this clash of ideologies and power within Konoha. As the door closed behind him, the room still resonated with the echoes of Danzo's ominous warning, leaving the Third Hokage to contemplate the challenges that lay ahead. - A_Beautiful_Hart2mthCommented
Not a fight but a one-sided beatdown, and it's the bludgers he gotta be worried about. Perfectly fine answer then :D
I gave him a bewildered look, "What? Of course not. Plus it isn't me he should be worried about." - A_Beautiful_Hart2mthReplied to ferferfer2
1 galleon a space, it's quite cheap to raise.
[Inventory: 261/1,500] - A_Beautiful_Hart2mthReplied to carefreeshadow
Plus, magic is half emotions. I'd love to see one kick up a storm, litterally.
We called these girls, ice dolls, beautiful to look at but easier to break. I remember me and my friends laughing whenever one of these ice dolls would finally crack and go full Carrie at school. - A_Beautiful_Hart2mthCommented
I have deduced it is because of my two / I have attributed that change to my .. (edit suggestions)
I have deduced it to my two kekkai genkai bloodline and also my early usage of chakra. - A_Beautiful_Hart2mthCommented
7500 USD is your monthly expenses ? Ok so what is your 10k paying job please ? The average pay in usa is 6k5, and people have to put some away for rainy days.
Another thing that I noticed is that my player account has been approved, and I have received around 7,500 USD in my bank account, which is neither a small nor too large amount, just enough to pay for a month's expenses. - A_Beautiful_Hart3mthReplied to Phil_Morris
Yeah, I liked the skipping ! No need to copy paste things and only give us half a chapter, it feels like a nice soup but diluted with water, making it bland.
"This is not about waving wands wildly; many of you won't even believe this is magic. I don't expect you to fully appreciate the art of simmering cauldrons, producing white smoke, and releasing delightful aromas. Nor do I expect you to grasp the magic that flows into the veins, bewildering hearts, and minds... but I can teach you how to enhance your reputation, brew glory, and even cheat death. There's one thing, however, I won't tolerate the type of idiocy I often encounter." He continued. - A_Beautiful_Hart3mthCommented
He doesn't have white enough hair to say that. Plus, he's two-eyed, so no saving grace.
"Sorry about that, Harry, I got held up because a black cat crossed my path," Mike offered his apology with a shrug. - A_Beautiful_Hart3mthCommented
So, it's not a special situation of a Unique Evolver ?
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