This was an amazing story well rounded also didn't solely focus on the main character whilst ignoring the rest loved the main characters creativity and the way magic was used and portrayed in the story

Thanks for the chapter

The mc spent most of the story fighting against a losing battle just to lose in the end.Too depressing. Although i liked the idea of the book it had much more potential and could have been pivotal idea to the whole story with a chapter with reality bending ,origin magic , control of fundemntal physical forces or even sorce magic

Fantastic read overall nice unique main character with interesting world building too, also love his innate skill "will" it just opens up so many possibilities

A very good fanfiction overall, it has amazing characters, love the uniqueness also love the udea of past and future bulma fusing, fucking vados all in all it's just a terrific novel i would rate 5 out of 5 if it wasn't for the sudden termination and unstable schedule