Review Detail of Georg_Spaner in I Have The Power Of Artifacts!

My man, you have many wonderful ideas in this book and all your other ones. You also are a very persistent person who can devote more time to a story. However, I strongly advise you to take a seat and attempt to approach the entire webnovel project more similarly to writing a "normal" book. Do not misunderstand me; the majority of the books on this site are simply trashy power fantasy. Even though you've written so many novels, it's clear that you hope to write even better works in the future. Now that that is out of the way, I advise using quillbot, grammerly, or another grammar checker. Your sentence structure is disorganized, but your spelling is generally fine. The pacing is really off—you jump from scene to scene, don't let the action settle, and don't even let your characters have a few more minutes to talk. My opinion is exactly that—my opinion. Please go ahead as you are comfortable. I just wanted to give you a few pointers as someone who has read hundreds of webnovels as well as "regular" books like The Lord of the Rings or Brandon Sanderson. I wish you success as you pursue your writing.