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Brand_5011

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2022-11-24 JoinedGlobal
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_50112d
    Commented

    what is this, animal crossing cityfolk?

    Ch 44 Owning Oreburgh!
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    Pokemon- World's 'Strongest' Trainer
    Anime & Comics · AgentMonke
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_50113d
    Commented

    We still need to do those statues for all the Pokémon

    Ch 694 CH74 (688), Happy Development
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    Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
    Anime & Comics · Azrail93
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_50113d
    Commented

    its obvious larvitar needs the ancient gene first then the giant gene followed by the royal gene in that order

    Ch 692 CH72 (686), The Chosen One (2)
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    Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
    Anime & Comics · Azrail93
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_50116d
    Commented

    HMM.... the dialog comprehension kinda dropped this chapter. Hopefully that can get fixed because I'm pretty sure I got a migraine from reading that.

    Ch 617 Danny's decision
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    Pokemon - A real story
    Anime & Comics · TheSilverPrince
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_501114d
    Commented

    goziiiwaaa

    Ch 66 The Birth of the Beast
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    Orario Records of Bastard Cheating Minecrafter
    Anime & Comics · Vulkizaro_Zoromi
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_501116d
    Commented

    Happy Mother's Day to all. Hug ya mom

    Ch 55 50: Surprise Christmas Cake
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    Gotham's Dead End Bar
    Anime & Comics · Daddy
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_501116d
    Commented

    ngl outside of battle update writing style this feels near the same as before the remake. is there a plot difference or something because it feels like the author copied and pasted the 'old' story and rewrote minor elements that very few people seem to notice. we're not too far from the "old" plot. im concerned that the story lost its previous reader base without a viable reason. archer's motivation is the same, his actions are very near the same, his interpersonal relations are the same. the pokemon wilderness search and interactions in the habitat surprisingly feel compressed with reduced dialog or description compared to the OG even if it possibly wasnt. i really-REALLY want this fic to succeed but every time i read a chapter i know already existed and anticipated reading the next i cant help but compare from memory and find it unfortunately lacking and it peeves me out of pure anticipation of some form of plot twist that makes it distinct from the old story. maybe its just me but i hope the story goes farther than before

    Ch 33 Chapter 33 : Speech
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    Pokemon: Trainer SI
    Anime & Comics · KK9494
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_501117d
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    not sure if i should put this here or not but a user by the name of Johanssen10 has a near identical copy of this story by the name of "Soccer: I have the attributes of Messi" on this platform. not sure if he's the original writer (no way to prove that from a general reader POV) but i feel that either story from either user is a Chinese translation derived from a different platform. I recommend that you take caution when adding to the reader's library, as both could be removed for the sake of unverified plagiarism. Anyway, the story is decent enough even with its eccentricities of Chinese based/east Asian culturally hinted proverbed dialect style and thoughts commonly found in popular Chinese based fanfic stories. The overall pacing is decent; enough to casually pickup and put down for light reading, with the characters being straightforward but dull or on the nose to the overall caricature arc of what they were well known for in real life or what the author initially write them as upon first introduction (examples being: timid, bold and brash, bully, overeager under achiever). (as of 119 chapters in, fully up to date, we are nearing the end of the current arc) The story development is fairly modest due to the fact that most of the development of reincarnation also has real life data analytics open to the public of all past games. I cannot give much on world background as the focus is on the actions of characters and fan reactions with little to nothing of note in description of off-topic life nore travel other than going to or leaving the destination so long as it doesn't involve football and even when it does, it's a very brief summary of intimate interactions similar to a break/halftime period of real life football; its a disappointing bare minimum. Overall this story while fine to read it potentially can become dull over time. Despite the MC's direct actions, there isnt much in the way off-topic or sub-topic interplay that directly challenges or offshoots the mc mental state, eccentricities, or private hobbies other than being aloof unless directly having the plot place the issue as a head on obstacle. Nothing about family, or friends, their interests that ties to MC's growth, or even advice that goes into a "peak messi" even with a template. it feels like i just read something akin to playing the video game football manager but with the unceasing premonition of EA's terrible single player story mode/career mode that ive come to expect of current titles. i pray it doesnt become such a story as i actually look forward to reading a sports related fanfic. by the standards of web novel the review score is [3.4] but with no available half stars in the system i have to personally give it a [3.7] with a potential at max being a [4.3] for future proofing as my instincts tell me its gonna be a consistent struggle for creative sparks of sub topic dialog that intermix with story tempo and lack of overall motivation or drive to retain being a footballer.

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    Football: Start by Replicating Peak Messi's Attributes
    Celebrities · AngelicTL
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_501119d
    Commented

    ngl if i didnt read the title then id loosely would thing this was pickle rick

    Ch 78 Chapter 78 Goblins
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    I Am Energy In Dc
    Anime & Comics · Thirty_six_Hours
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_501129d
    Commented

    I hope they remind the world the reason why Zane even acted in the first place because overall he's been surprisingly reactive in nature and only responds whenever it involves the government. I mean, it's not like Zane doesn't have video evidence or eyewitness to people coming to his house repeatedly. Heck, I wouldn't be surprised if he showed a video of fury literally breaking into his home.

    Ch 135 I Refuse
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    Marvel : Godly Lottery System
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_50111mth
    Commented

    Tomboy zoey gang

    zoey
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    Pokemon: Reborn as ash , Make up for your regrets and become stronger
    Anime & Comics · stromerthaha
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_50111mth
    Replied to WTF_WTF

    Ah, yes, that ever-elusive degree in failure management

    Finally finishing his studies at his university, he was about to embark on the road of success (sarcastic dreams), until disaster and misfortune hit him at once.
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    A Superhero Harem? Their love makes me stronger (MHA, OPM, Naruto, OP)
    Anime & Comics · ThighsSeeker
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_50111mth
    Commented

    AW man we lost out on Cheelai

    Ch 46 Announcement 2
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    Dragon Ball: Back in Black
    Anime & Comics · OmniSpectra
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_50111mth
    Commented

    we're just making RL craft at this point

    Ch 44 Chapter Forty-four:Harmony Talk.
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    ASOIAF/GOT: Minecraft in Essos.
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_50111mth
    Commented

    i think slowking as a first option and cloyster as a second but remember that a slowking needs a kings rock for its evolution where slowbro doesnt need it. slowking does know how to talk in the old show with a high enough intelligence and psy Esper so that makes for good levity for the story too

    Ash got a new water Pokemon shellder what should I evolve him into cloyster, slowbro or a slowking.
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    Pokemon: Reborn as ash , Make up for your regrets and become stronger
    Anime & Comics · stromerthaha
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_50111mth
    Commented

    aww man short chapter today

    Ch 43 38: The Aspects of Raven
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    Gotham's Dead End Bar
    Anime & Comics · Daddy
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_50111mth
    Commented

    aww cmon make a separate story and leave the old one. all that good content

    Ch 1 Chapter 1- New Beginning
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    Pokemon: Trainer SI
    Anime & Comics · KK9494
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_50111mth
    Commented

    i do hope steve and alex get together as well

    Ch 55 Conflict and Interest
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    Orario Records of Bastard Cheating Minecrafter
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_50111mth
    Commented

    what is this, a manifest doctrine from 8chan?

    Ch 4 not chapter
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    New God in marvel
    Movies · DarknessAuthor
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  • Brand_5011
    Brand_50111mth
    Commented

    discombobulate

    Ch 34 Chapter 34 X-men Part 2/2 Edited
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    Marvel: Tech System
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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