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Secad17dCommentedWhile it is impossible to have more holes than a swivel, ... nice alliteration
That person was Tyrion. Tyrion's body was currently riddled with numerous bullet holes. The only difference between him and a sieve is that he had more holes than it.- Secad21dCommented
A situation where the comments are more interesting than the paragraph.... lols[img=recommend]
So, last night was different to say the least, as I found myself getting some sleep later than usual. The food and...everything else hit the spot, taking my mind off the many thoughts constantly clashing in my head. A hunter's stamina was nothing to laugh at - Secad1mthCommented
isn't he Noel?
"Sir Leon, I have encompassed all the information of the Marriott group. You can look at details of all shareholders, board members, and core members along with their families and other important details. Their work process - Secad2mthCommentedCh 270 Chapter 270
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- Secad2mthCommentedCh 409 Hibernating and Hallucinations
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2 million? this is typo right?
[ physique: 2660000 ] - Secad4mthCommented
why is the vitality always fluctuating?
[ vitality: 2400 ] - Secad4mthCommented
Swimming and water powers still not included... when you copy and paste, please update
[ skills: super hacker God, all-rounded martial arts master, stylish man (18 changes to 24), god of medicine, God of basketball, God of song, God of detective, God of car, fashion design Master, intelligent master, ability to detect other people's information and resumes, Deadpool ability, beast language Kasaya ] - Secad4mthCommented
Very horrible conditions
[ vitality: 1250 ] - Secad4mthCommented
The system took a bit off from his intelligence
[ intelligence: 250 ] - Secad4mthCommented
Water God is missing
[ skills: super hacker god, all-rounded martial arts master, stylish man (18 changes to 24), god of medicine, god of basketball, god of song, god of detective, god of car, fashion design master, intelligent master, able to detect other people's information and resume, deadpool ability ] - Secad4mthCommented
I really wonder why there were no comments here!!
then, he hugged the sports car and fell into a deep sleep! - Secad4mthCommented
How do you come up with these alliterations?
Previously, after Ye Feng treated sun Xiaomeng that night, she had noticed that Ye Feng seemed to have fired accidentally, and there was a faint smell of gunpowder. - Secad4mthCommented
This is really killing. Too much insinuation in the whole plot and not one real display...
feeling ye feng's strange gaze, how could qin qingqing not know what ye feng was thinking? her eyes were filled with embarrassment and anger, she glared at him and said coyly, " - Secad5mthCommented
Thank you for not leaving it before now..although we would prefer the story goes in for a while.the growth in writing shows as the chapters progress.a good read.
I will now fully focus on White Online, my current masterpiece, and I hope you all well. - Secad5mthCommented
May I suggest you allow some suggestions if bullet points which you will later develop.since we all know the story isn't complete till Ichiro becomes the new hope of humanity and a grandmaster. you still have some arcs which you have hinted at to help out.the tournament (inter country) where he will consolidate his martial generalleaving school and travelling to enter the elfs' arc where he meets the elf princess and wakes his bloodlinefight with underworld arc 1 where he becomes stronger than kings after starting his growth phase at age 18the hidden ones resurgence arc where the supreme one shows up and gives an ultimatumanother self growth on the death island where he becomes a saint and negotiates an arrangement with the beasts for peace of humankind becoming a grand masterfacing and finally destroying the underworld and assassin's arcdefeating the supreme one in a battlefacing death and achieving immortality and unending reincarnationconclusionNote: Just a suggestion
However, my ideas ran out concerning Martial Arts System long time ago, and I am sure many of you noticed. I couldn't put my utmost effort for this and that's why, I think this story could have been so much better, however, when you write something that seems a chore, it is also incredibly difficult to write something good. - Secad5mthCommented
Can you maybe come back to this after a while?
I just can't feel happiness, only exhaustion. - Secad5mthCommented
So sad... Actually a good read
Author Note: Thanks to everyone who has reached this far in the story. I decided to end Martial Arts System at this part, because I felt very stressed and unhappy of writing this story. - Secad5mthCommented
Needs to evolve after he has exceeded his past self
[Kurogami Ichiro's Legacy: The Legacy of Earth's Strongest Warrior - You can use one attack per week with the same strength as Kurogami Ichiro had in his prime!]