Gerald_de_Belen
of reading
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Read books
Cleavage
Memory card
Entire room
You may avoid using comparison like this people with AIDS as it will bring negative impact on some of your readers
Sly not sky i think
Rarely instead of really seen
It should be sources instead of sauces
Typo error for college
I think the author want to portray the father’s insights about his son. Hence, it must not be treated as the author’s general point of view regarding introverts.
We can omit “was made” At the last part
Please use periods and commas correctly.
Also, is it ‘yeaga’ or ’jeaga’?
Alex’s suspicion
Surely instead of surly
Should have 1 Marco only.
I think it should be “because of his hand” and not ”had”