This us a fun story!

The low bounty gag was funny at first now it's run its course. Chopper gag is because he is viewed as pet. A captain of those bounties would not have a low level bounty.

When are there new chapters? I have already read these chapters on a different site month ago.

What? How did get access to nen. That's huge thing to just gloss over.

Why are you shifting point of view all the time, It doesn’t make for a good story. Sometimes it makes sense but you shift POVs at random and it takes you out of the story. Keep to one POV som one can get to know the main character. The premise of the story was the thing that drew me to this story. But since you hope around the characters like pinball I am out. Good luck with your writing.

If you cant get the name right then dont expect people to enjoy or read this story. Borsalino

Interesting start, but reading about baby for more then a few chapter isnt fun. So hopefully the SI will grow up fast, a few time skips might be in order.👍

Been so long since the last chapter I got no clue what's going any more. More frequent updates please

I really hope he wont sell that book. Great story, looking forward to what comes next!

Interesting start to a story. I am always willing to give Buffy story ago.

He fell of his horse and he proclaimed that he is chosen of the horse God. That would make many question his validity.

I am sorry but jumping form pov to pov of different characters before you even laid the foundation for your main character. That just makes me not want to read more. Cool concept but it need work.

Fix the dialog, because that isn't how you write it. And for me it makes this story unreadable. "Jade:" "Mother:" Rewrite this please. The story premise looked like it could be fun but as it is now. I won't be reading it.

I am really enjoying this story. And exploring the dark continent, how that is fun. Keep up the amazing writing.

Its been awhile, glad to see that your are still posting new chapters. Because this is fun and entertaining story.

I got on issues and that's the arbitrary number you gave about the magic? How did you get that number? Seams to me she could have said it more magic in the minecraft world. Other thrn that I am enjoying this story.

I really tried to get past the mic being a baby for so long. After forcing myself to read the first twelve chapters of this story and the mic still being a baby, this story was definitely not for me. This story doesn’t get my recommendation.

Before nika I would have probably skipped this story, but now that Luffy has that power I am all in. Great start to a story and you have caught my attention and interest. So looking forward to more!

This was fun surprise, glad you have take up the torch! I am really enjoying reading ? And I am looking forward to your continued translation of this story.

I found that for me, the first two chapters where not need in this story. I am not fan of when people get to interact with rob or other gods at the beginning of fic. But the rest of the story has been fun and interesting. So will keep an eye out for more chapters.