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Zarko_152dCommentedCh 28 Ch 28: The World's Balance- Zarko_153dPosted
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thank you for the chapter, and i was thinking that the current pace at which you release chapters is good ( keeping the current length in mind) and very sustainable because it doesn't make me wait a whole week and also makes me eager to check for new chapters every other day too but i think the pace of the story is a bit slow but may be you could be planning for a faster pace after settling the foundation of mc's growth in the future so i would love it if you could pick the pace up after a few chapters
Ch 16 Chapter 16: Qi (1) - Zarko_153dCommented
sense the hearts of those around it and materialize their deepest desires. I see it's all according to my plan
The katana formed in my hands and I placed it on the ground beside me then I moved on to the next item. a small, bluish-purple orb composed of a unique substance with a glass-like outer shell its power lies in its ability to sense the hearts of those around it and materialize their deepest desire. I made three of these in total. - Zarko_158dReplied to Zarko_15Ch 14 Chapter 14: Acupuncture
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thanks for the chapter. i don't know what you intend to do with yang kai but if you wish to keep him as a friendly rival or something you can try to pair his sister(make her only a few years younger than yang kai and an adult by the time its time to live for the starry sky) with the mc so that they won't fall out for greed or anything. also apart from su yan(golden dragon source is a must for body cultivation above dao seal realm and high vitality for limb and organ regeneration) and xia ning chang(alchemy dao is necessary) you can try to pair other girls with mc rather than the one who were with yang kai but could have had huge potential like yang yan, lan you ruo, jiu feng etc
Ch 14 Chapter 14: Acupuncture - Zarko_1510dReplied to The_All_in_One
it just increases efficiency dramatically for some time
He grumbled, the cursed energy in his body weakening as he watched the curse collide with some dead trees. - Zarko_1510dCommented"Bye Bye!"
- Zarko_1511dCommentedCh 8 Chapter: 8
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thank you for the chapter, i have a suggestion that if you give yang kai the soul warming lotus then give our protagonist the stainless pure lotus "without the heaven devouring battle law" with the excuse that when wu kuangs body was destroyed, the lotus was thrown into the void and reached here also you can make yang kai do wu kuang's role later in the story if you think it can disrupt the balance
Ch 13 Chapter 13: Breaktrough - Zarko_1518dReplied to xCo0ordinate
i think the concept of ice being combination of water and wind is just taken from naruto kekkai genkai concept, except atg in most of chinese history and even in wuxia novels the 5 elements do not even contain wind, it's fire, water. earth, wood, gold
'How so? as much I can tell it's ice, ice is a mixture of wind and water, both are perfect for woman to practise...' I said after observing her walk into Merchant guild. - Zarko_1519dReplied to Supreme_pig
except for?
Once I arrived there, I was taken to 'proper' Earth Profound expert who inspected me, he was very impressed and instantly took me under his wing, the man instantly said that I have potential to be Elder, as the sect is actually family-based, so I will need to marry into the family and get name Jian added to my one, by the way, my name in this world is simply Feng, that's right simply Feng... to have a surname or house name people have to be quite rich in the first place... - Zarko_1520dReplied to An_op_Angel
yes
"There was an unforseen accident. His memories... were unrecoverable." At that moment kushina started to cry as Minato held his head in his hands. - Zarko_1520dReplied to OMN1CR0N_GAMING
she might be healing it daily to ever let it develop any form of disease
All she could do was look on to where he use to be. Without any hesitation Tsunade began to chug the bottle in her hand without respite. All she wanted was to forget this conversation ever happened.