Venereble_Oldest
Authors keep in mind that people generally like to make comments that greatly disregard your struggles and results in an effort to make them feel better about themselves. Keep doing God's work bros
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Venereble_Oldest1yrPostedI don't write reviews that much but for a story like this, it's worth :) I know people bash on this or hate it cause he's still a slave but I'm okay with anything bud. I think the read was great cause of the yandere's :)) especially the milf Lockhart me likey <3. And sometimes cliches and cringe or wish-fulfilling fanfics is just what you need to satisfy urself with living a different life. but you don't get those nowadays because people like to read what they want and not care about the Author's feelings or how some readers just want to hate and trash the fanfic cause they want approval... I mean if you wanna read a book/fanfic you want then why don't you write one so we can judge it 🤷, It takes effort to write a fanfic and I'm not trying to defend the guy but at least dont be a little btch about every little thing cause ur ruining the Authors motivation to write for people who actually like it. I know this review was messy but I just wanted to say what was on my mind hope you have a nice day :)
- Venereble_Oldest1yrCommentedBut to sum it up, villains are just pathetic bitches.
- Venereble_Oldest1yrCommentedCh 31 The Game Must Go On
- Venereble_Oldest1yrCommentedCh 31 Kidnapping?..Abduction? Forcing?..It's natural for the Villains.
- Venereble_Oldest1yrCommentedCh 29 Rebirth? Fated-enemies?
- Venereble_Oldest1yrCommentedCh 28 Flashback…
- Venereble_Oldest1yrCommented
Some girl reading this would probably feel offended. But who cares am I right? 😈
If Su Chen was here, he would laugh out aloud- One of the best tricks in making a woman fall for you is to get her curious about you. Most of the woman act like some-sage, they have a notion in their mind that all they need is just once glance, just a little information and they already know how bad and useless a boy is~ - Venereble_Oldest1yrCommentedCh 22 Chapter 17: The Phantom Assault [3]
- Venereble_Oldest1yrReplied to Venereble_OldestCh 334 Summon Buster Call accidentally...detailCreating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH
- Venereble_Oldest1yrCommented
This is just a suggestion but can Rob(MC) draw himself in the manga as a major character? I know we already saw him in the flashback of robin but maybe Author-sama can add him as the character that influenced luffy to becoming the pirate king or make a reveal at the end of one piece that he was the narrator all all. IDK I'm not the author of this masterpiece, the author BlackStar_BH is and I'm just suggesting the MC get more credit in the manga. He already plagiarized one piece maybe the higher beings are lenient and allow rob to change the manga a bit to spice things up.
Ch 334 Summon Buster Call accidentally...detailCreating Manga Of One Piece In Pirates World Become My Ultimate Goal!Anime & Comics · BlackStar_BH - Venereble_Oldest1yrCommentedCh 17 A Long Time Coming... (R-18)
- Venereble_Oldest1yrCommentedMy fingernails run down his back, and my legs shake uncontrollably. A pleasure I've never felt before takes over my body, and the shaking that started in my legs spreads all over my body. My ankles roll in pleasure, and my toes curl and uncurl from the mixture of pain and pleasure.
- Venereble_Oldest1yrCommented
Author is a natural at this, Bros body count might be in the triple digits.
"You've taught me so much of home... Our history... And you've brought me to this state... Where I'm out of breath from but a kiss... I can run and fight for hours... But you leave me breathless..." - Venereble_Oldest1yrCommented
I love you 3000 ❤️.
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... I stand corrected.
"It took you 11 seconds to settle down, time is precious..it is said that 'time is money' in the past but its more precious now.." His gaze traveled around.. - Venereble_Oldest1yrCommentedAnd since I am such a caring Author..how about you give me stones?? And thanks for the 14 rank..
- Venereble_Oldest1yrCommentedThe ugly bastard was just a 'late bloomer' and awakened his quirk in this 20's....So things like this is quite rare....
- Venereble_Oldest1yrCommentedCh 20 Chapter 15: The Phantom Assault [1]
- Venereble_Oldest1yrCommentedCh 53 Before the Rating Game started Qin Tian of course did not forget to complain