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it's a interesting story so far (I'm in ch 20) and I hope that it keeps getting interesting. I have a couple of advices tho, you should put more tags and explain that it is a sayan in the rwby. I don't like the name Kron but that's just my opinion so don't stress over it and finally i don't know why but when you write an a (alone)it's always a capital letter. For example: I was looking at the scenery when A nevermore appeared. if you can try to correct that mistake for future chapters. Overall I enjoyed the story so keep you work, I just wanted to give you a piece of my mind don't take it in a bad way please. Also, I don't know what to think about the artwork....
I would say a dog more than a cat.
A really interesting and funny take on the fate grand order series, I enjoy the banter the Mc generates and the reactions of the other characters to his shenanigans. I hope this fic will have a more mature tone when needed but overall I enjoyed reading this work so far. Keep up the good work author or I will punch you!
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pink?? English is not my first language so anyone can tell me if this is an expression or something among the likes?? thanks beforehand by the way.
And I don't understand why does he love so much Raenyra??? He was exhiled all her childhood, she didn't even remembered him due to that. I find this stupid and only for the plot, really disapointing
Red left the chat...
ash's daddy???
this illya???
his wii??