Dragon_Worrier
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you know your writing is good but the way you write I feel tired sometimes while reading. You put too much emphasis on words which is good but you do it too much . Please make it simple like when characters are talking to each other it will make it more realistic and simple to read . Put the different words when needed or when you like it will make it more enjoyable. BTW your story is good!
you know your writing is good but the way you write I feel tired sometimes while reading. You put too much emphasis on words which is good but you do it too much . Please make it simple like when characters are talking to each other it will make it more realistic and simple to read . Put the different words when needed or when you like it will make it more enjoyable. BTW your story is good!
I would call her Mundere
it's seasmoke