You should lay off the interaction between Merlin and Orion and focus on his every day with the people around him instead of just skipping their conversations. I suggest a redemption ark for Harry/Nick and have him join forces with them.

Not really surprising because I'm reading another story about Harry Potter having six eyes. I like this so far but please don't make him a dark lord.

James didn't learn a darn thing with the inheritance test did he?

Good about the system because I hate the ones that you have to kill to get stronger or the ones that gives everything on a silver platter.

It's funny and all but after the third time it gets boring and quit throwing women. Another thing when someone pops in a woman's bath you leave immediately don't stand there gawking.

I like the story and all but Nick Irons aka Harry Potter is an idiot thinking that Rose and Orion should not exist like he's never heard of alternate Universes so he tried to kill them off.

Thanks for the chapter and keep them coming. The thing about the relationship with Pademe and Anikin is she wasn't strong enough to be by his side and mentally weak and the Jedi cancel didn't help matters at the time and didn't take him seriously and I like the way you changed that.

Please come back.

I like long chapters. Thank you for the story.

When writing those kind of things it's really up to the author but I have to say try to keep it short instead of chapter after chapter because to me it gets boring and takes away from the story.

I liked the chapter but a little too much info dump with the monsters. And I believe this has a potential to be harem because how you described the feelings of the girls at his house. But to help him because free from his farther after all this it should be Sayakangi and Asuna.

Most love interests have been people from cote so I suggest Asuna or one of the others from sao.

I already like this one better than your other one. So please keep writing it. Because he is now truly free.

I like it. It was nice having him put Koenji in his place for once. Thank you.

I don't know much about Yamaura but if you do then use her because there are too many with the others you mentioned. Thank you for the chapter.

If he is Harry then I don't like the fact that he is trying to kill his female counterpart. But otherwise I like the story.

Thanks for the chapter. Could you please stop mixing the genders otherwise the story is great.

I just like him more than light. But it would be cool after your done with this one to have light go against kyotaka. The romance of the story you have 3 people to choose from and my pick goes to Miki because I have never heard of her until now because I tried to read the original but I just can't handle Kyotaka.

OK delete this chapter and I like the book so keep up the good work.

Thank you for coming back. But they could check the cameras around the bath house to see if he was really dragged there.