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The idea itself is very good.not many fan fics realize that sealing jutsu is so op. Even anime itself had to kill off almost all sealing jutsu masters{ushiogakure} because of it being so op. And don’t forget it took the scheme of all 5 village and tens of thousands of ninja. And the thing is it was an ambush not even a total war. As long as this fic explores on sealing jutsu with proper plot I am sticking around.
I think ur making him a bit too powerful. Guildards is a monster no 12. Year should last 2 rounds with him. He is like the top 5 in the show along side acknologia , august and irene. I would say acknologia is broken, august borderline cheat then guildards and irene.
Honestly the concept of being a hero in MHA with no quirk is like wanting to be a ninja with no chakra. The body of normal human just won't be able to compare....just because a kid is determined doesn't mean he is bana ace a PhD thesis. Some gaps are impossible to cover..