this is translated if you want to criticize the story you should go to the original story to do it. the transelator probaly spent a lot of time translating this and the review will make the author want to stop translating. i dont think your can do anything to change the story i really want for the author to finish this and dont want to only read part of it bc of a bad rating or review. also the mc gets a lot stronger later in the story. the story also gets better

i love the uniqueness of the story. im not sure if this is on a mtl website or you transalated yourself. either way i feel like u edited it making it much easier to understand. i hope you can continue transelating if there is more chapter to transelate since i really want to see the end of this story.

I loved the story but you should convert it to a fanfiction so I can read the whole thing! the idea of this story was unique and I enjoyed reading it.

loved the story wish there was more adventure time fanfics since this is the only good one I found. waiting for the second part to come out hopefully you can recommend some other adventure time fanfics

i haven't read it :/

tbh i haven't read this