Quick question: Is it change in destiny or degrading public morals that I think Yuna dominating Hela in Marvel will be hot ???

Hmm so they are gonna continue drinking honestly I want to read a chapter with yuna and Yamamoto genrysai meeting it would be fun also I think it's almost time for yuna to break bee in

Poor danzo

Well sinshui nice knowing ya Hehe poor man don't even know that he is allowing the cake demon into his house. Nanao apparently her family was all female and had a curse that killed all male.members who married or were there.in the family. Guess that doesn't apply to yuan after all Hmm kyoraku was nanao's uncle i guess Hehe he don't know that the cabbage he was protecting is going to be stolen by yuna

Honestly ichigo was just a cheat character Got hit , get stronger Got killed, get even stronger Zaraki is a true man he just wanna fight no matter the result

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The lion to his father: EMOTIONAL DAMAGE!!!

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Poor Quincy i am sure even those hidden of yawach faction will sympathize with him By the way 3

More Man if you make a story go according to the process now then you should definitely add #yuri in its gener Why? Because that's how it's supposed to be. You can't expect having a cat girl in eleceed and her not being with jiyoung

More please

Why oh why it was going soo good then you just had to drop in and say no more please tell me it's a joke and you write soo well too please please tell me it's a joke i can't bare to watch it all end here where's the love between him and yoroichi where is his funny time with old man Yama where is his attempts to save Yama from aize. Then fight side by side against yawach.

Good good good I like the background of the story. But can't honestly evaluate it just yet so here are some suggestions. If the mc is a reincarnator then make his background military so as to explain his explicit knowledge on firearms. Honestly try not to add witch branch of soul society in the western country. Most people would lose interest. Make it pure bleach fan fiction. And by that I mean no dxd, hotd, hp or anything it gets messed up. Honestly this is my personal opinion but don't take tatsuki as the main female. Try taking someone from soul society. Add a systematic power level like 5th seat, 4th seat, 3rd seat, lieutenant and captain etc. Make the mc powerful but just not too op like oneshot hitsugaya or anything that reads like fake. Honestly that's all i got. Keep updating the chapters after it reaches around 50 people will naturally start reading specially after the TYBW ending that just came . Man seriously he just had to go and kill all of them off like that. And try not to release anymore until you reach the middle of this one or else you will burn out all ideas and story line that you wanted to add. That's all hope it helps you. It's going extremely good till now. Keep up the good work. P.S ( There are not many Yuri work of bleach after this you may want to work on some of those it's just my personal liking for Yuri though if you don't want to nobody is forcing you) Bye. Have a good day

Hmmmm this is a tough choice... Well if you want her or not it all depends on the backstory you are going to add. Did you honestly think that her being able to do magic wouldn't affect the choice. You can add a nice backstory about her clan being what not and her being ... And her clan dying xyzxyz that will encite a better plot. As for the goblins it's better to kill em ... Kill em all

Please author just don't kill anyone of the deerkin family of hers that will get too dark too quickly I don't want an attack on Titan or akame ga kill wannanbes

Hmmmmm seriously can't you not leave us on cliffhangers i get so annoyed that I can't concentrate on my exams that are currently going on.

Hmmmm kenpachi zaraki training that's unusual. Genryu sure didn't lose his touch. Byakuya hehehe sure you don't want to know if that is really just snow or not. Yep yuna can get that pussy*cat* anytime she want but she might try and get a moth too . I guess she might get along with sinshui well enough. That's my honest review so far

Great battle though you nerfed pakkun and his team a bit but still... It was good

Moreeeeee If there are so many cliffhanger I might as well put up a tent in the writer's house

That fox is definitely jiraya's master too