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I find the story interesting! When Jenny’s backstory was shown, I find it quite sad. Being independent at a young age and not growing in the presence of a biological family can have an impact to a person, even if it’s in real life. I’ve read several chapters, and Gabriel being a part of Jenny’s life from years back is a big mystery, and the curiosity that it gives makes me want to read further (and I will). I’m sure more interesting events will unfold in the next chapters. Looking forward to it! <3
This part makes me curious! Can't wait to find out who this is. <3
In the first few chapters, I've already seen how the author reveals the kind of world the non-human characters have little by little. I find it intriguing, because I saw the details of how they looked like, and it leaves me imagining how the characters look like. Well done! I'm sure that there will be more interesting events. Hoping for the best for your work! 👏
At first I found it strange that, 'wait, there's no groom, just a wheelchair' but that sense of mystery is catchy. The protagonist had a rough family events, turning her to make big decisions in one go (signing without reading). I find it interesting because the further events are intriguing. I'll keep reading! ❤️