Thanks I'm already aware of the grammer but I didn't think that the spacing might also be a problem! Now that I'm looking at it I can see it's somewhat intimidating to see blocky paragraphs. Thanks for the advice! As I go back at some point and revise and improve all the grammer after I find someone I know who can be an editor for my novel or an app that can help with grammer I will take this into account!

Please, I'd love it if you could do so! it's a big help for me since even after I sometimes go over chapters I find myself making mistakes and I don't have any editor to help with this so i'd appreciate the help, thank you!

Thanks for the review, sorry I didn't see this until so late and I hope you will continue enjoying this novel. There will be plenty of twists within the novel I will make that clear but I also want to say this is a story of characters changing emotionally. It's not just some "I'm the strongest with knowledge", even with their abilities and knowledge the MC'S will struggle and evolve not just in power but as people. Anyways, thank you for the review

Thanks for the advice, I'm happy you're enjoying the direction that the story is going and I hope it will continue to interest you. I can only agree with you the punctuation, I've been trying to find apps that can help with this like grammarly but I haven't found one that works for me yet. Once I've found one that does I plan on going back and editing all chapters for improvements but for now until I find that chapters will be like this. If you have any recommendations please tell me

Shameless Author 5 star review here! This is a hard hitting, emotional transmigration story with a large total of 3 protagonists (Two males and one female) going into the world of a novel. Through out their journey we see them adapting to this new world and getting stronger as well as going through many changes as humans along the way. There will be many enemies along they way for them to fight and beat. Why enemies and not villains? Because all characters are living beings that function with reasons behind their actions, none are truly evil, we simply just don't understand their view point yet. I hope you join us on their adventure in this novel world as they fight enemies and discover themselves on an emotional rollercoaster. Even though this is my first book I hope it will be an enjoyable one for all of you!

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