Seriously, I've never been a fan of Vampire Romance stories, but this one is definitely good. It has an amazing storyline and great dialogue. There are times that I'm confused about what's going on, but overall, reading it was worth the time. Keep it up!
I'm not a fan of adult romance, but this one definitely interests me. I love every structure of dialogue and the interaction between the ML and Fl. Keep it up! I hope that the story will develop in the same way as the characters relationships!
I love the writing style and how the author describes the character's appearance. Reading the first chapter already got me hooked, and I realized that this was going to be a great story! Keep it up!
t's my first time reading a vampire story, and it's really interesting, especially since it has a female lead. I hope you continue writing and keep up this good story!
Thank you! Your support and encouragement are very much appreciated!🤗
Hello, I'm the author of this novel and I apologize in advance for any shortcomings you may find in my work. As a Grade 10 student, I am still learning and developing my skills as a writer, but writing has become my passion and escape from the stresses of schoolwork.
I love the story, and the dialogue felt natural. There are some points that need improvement, like showing us the environment and emotions of the characters, but overall, it's a great and refreshing read! Keep it up! I know you will improve as your character develops and the story goes on.