The novel has such a beautiful treasure, it's good that it's world-building. Progress is good, but the bad side outweighs the good. The author's other book is much better. the reason i quit this novel 1.Mc is a bit silly and we don't see a mature side. 2. The fight scenes are perhaps the worst of the novels I've ever read. 3. Repetitive words (It's almost too much to repeat without leaving system notifications, it makes you tired of reading. Finally: I read that the chapters would be better, but it's always the same, there is no improvement in the chapters, it's plain logic, but I still wish the author success in the next book. I have nothing to say in this book.

I recommend reading a good story. I hope more chapters to come

I read and commented up to chapter 280. The novel has capacity, but there are places that need to be better Until the 280th episode, the character development is almost non-existent, so we can say that it is zero. only +18 things to get stronger but other than that very little improvement. +18 episodes are a bit too much, it's ridiculous and unnecessary to have this in every episode, and this makes the novel go bad. Mc mentality is so disgusting. His IQ is like a 13-14 year old kid, we can say he's not smart, but he's not stupid either. character arrival is a must. I wish he had a better mentality towards women and he's a total hypocrite. In the story, apart from +18 chapters, people want to see more beautiful things, development, experience, adventure, stronger enemies, strategic planning and so on. I hope the book will be much better.

The novel is well worth a read. I hope the author will have many long chapters until the end of the novel. tnks.

Comment as episode 50. Worth reading. There are some beautiful places but some places are very arrogant. There are very silly fighting parts, especially in that part, it is very shallow to make nonsense review. Also, the dialogue is very wrong, sometimes there is an ambiguous place between the two conversations, it is not clear whether person A or person B is speaking. chapters are also slow. a novel with potential I hope its potential is shown

The novel is beautiful, but sometimes I think even the author doesn't know what she wrote, the good part comes, the war, the story flow and the next chapters sink to the bottom, you know.

I read the novel up to 1036 chapters. It has its good side, but it has its bad side. He likes to show off a lot but then runs away. Until now, important villains do not die, but bad enemies constantly appear. It's like the story repeats when there are 50-100 episodes, so in summary, the enemy doesn't die, only more enemies appear.

When will the author key figures die, not always the person who doesn't matter dies

It's in the top 3 of the worst books I've ever read.

open any partition +-10 chapters, 8 chapters useless empty partition the remaining 2 chapters are worth reading so there is a lot of padding

I recommend you read the novel, you will not regret it. It's a good novel. good luck to the author.

It's a good novel, but I don't think the story fits the title and description of the novel at all, I think the author could have called it alchemy or something. it's getting boring now

I don't understand why you always try to make such a great novel bad.

I recommend reading the general comments.

örneğin kılıç veya hançer kullanmaz, öğrenmez, puanlarını dağıtmaz. temiz, bunun yerine +20,,+30 puan veriyor, günlük +2 veya +5 dağıtıyor bunun yerine antrenmandan sonra çok güçlü hale getirebiliyor, mc biraz kurnaz ne yapabilirim bunun hakkında düşünmesini istiyorum as örneğin yaşlı jacj örneğin, max o kadar çok istiyorum ki manipüle edebileceği bir durumda biraz akıllı olmasını istiyorum, sadece kızın güzelliğini kurtarmak için turnuvaya girmek çok basit ve bu klişe, bunun yerine ilacı almak için başka bir şey yapılabilir, konu güzel ama ders basit not: ana dilim ingilizce değil not: bence kesinlikle kötü bir inceleme değil, sadece bir inceleme, teşekkürler