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VegetaIsBadass14hPostedMaybe the story is good, or maybe it's not. As a writer myself, I find this really bad. I don't know why others writers have not said this. But there can never be a story that succeeds without a synopsis. Like I said, I don't know if it's good or not, but I didn't read it because there's no synopsis. If you think I'm being petty, then I am.
- VegetaIsBadass7dReplied to OliveTwisted
Well, at least, thank you for reading my story and trying to put up with it. Hope you find a story you like. [img=recommend]
The galaxy resembled a celestial masterpiece, its swirling arms and radiant core drawing Hiroshi in with their mesmerizing beauty. It was the closest-looking galaxy to the Milky Way, a beacon of light and possibility in the vast expanse of space. - VegetaIsBadass8dReplied to OliveTwisted
It does improve. Please power through.
But deep down, Hiroshi knew that taking that path would be a betrayal of his own potential as a creator. It would mean shirking his responsibility and delegating his authority to another entity, robbing himself of the opportunity to fully embrace the journey that lay ahead. - VegetaIsBadass1mthReplied to The_FounderCh 46 Chapter 45
- VegetaIsBadass1mthReplied to PXIG
It seems like I did not deliver a good story for you. I hope you find a good story. Thank you for stopping by.
A new story here. I cannot stand writing long stories so this will be another short one. Checkout my other one shot and vote for me. Thank you. - VegetaIsBadass1mthReplied to Lomyril
Such good readers I have. Thank you. That was an awful mistake I made, hope that doesn't stop you from continuing .
This paragraph has been deleted. - VegetaIsBadass1mthReplied to OtakuMaster
The term 'Alpha' refers to the beginning, the first step anything amongst those lines. What I mean is, the Alpha System is the beginning of all. That's the most I can tell you for now, without spoilers.
"Hiroshi Hajiro, you have been chosen by the *Alpha System*," the voice intoned, its words resonating with an otherworldly authority that sent a chill down Hiroshi's spine. The mention of the Alpha System sent a jolt of apprehension coursing through him, its significance shrouded in mystery and uncertainty. - VegetaIsBadass1mthReplied to OtakuMaster
Why comment that?
"Hiroshi Hajiro, you have been chosen by the *Alpha System*," the voice intoned, its words resonating with an otherworldly authority that sent a chill down Hiroshi's spine. The mention of the Alpha System sent a jolt of apprehension coursing through him, its significance shrouded in mystery and uncertainty. - VegetaIsBadass1mthReplied to Nxgen_Snail_Kota
- VegetaIsBadass1mthReplied to The_FounderCh 34 Chapter 33 (Volume 2: Arc 2)
- VegetaIsBadass1mthReplied to TrueMonarch00Ch 36 Chapter 35
- VegetaIsBadass2mthReplied to TrueMonarch00
Know what. I'm going to do just that.
Sorry if I'm coming off a bit strong today, it's just frustrating dealing with these kinds of comments all the time. Hope I'm not bugging you too much with my venting. - VegetaIsBadass2mthReplied to VegetaIsBadass
- VegetaIsBadass3mthReplied to MLakuru
Longest comment I got so thank you. But if you had continued the story, you would understand why he did it. So I'll tell you, I won't delete your comment. It kinda gave me a different point of view. Try it I'm sure you'll enjoy, he doesn't even use the system for too long.[img=Sigh]
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