I actually edited it

I'm not sure what to think about it. There's something missing, but I don't know what. This is my first time reading something like this, but I'll still give it 4 stars. I might change my rating once more chapters are available

kinda hahaa

nvm

NP

i'm really sorry 😂

sorry then for ch6

done btw

In general, the change was made because I wasn't sure how to properly execute the first-person narration so I made this decision. Essentially only the first chapter looks like this which is why I would appreciate it if you continued reading. Thank you

synopsis will change so dont read that pleaseeeee

To be honest, I was slightly intrigued by why the "angel" wanted to kill her and so on. This review is only based on the first chapter and it seems a bit short to me. Overall, some sound effects could be added, such as some panting while she was running, to bring this action scene to life. However, I will continue reading because I am really curious about what will happen next. I would even like to see a comic based on this story.

Thank you very much for your review overall, my friend made the book cover and the first chapter is kind of narrated by someone and at the same time made in the same time as if the main character's friend was telling it to someone, you will understand as you read on. Generally, chapter 6 is a turning point and also shows why it is a sci-fi title. I would also like to add that I would be grateful if you continued reading. Thank you.

I really like the description of the world and the characters in general. I'm not very familiar with writing reviews, so I'll just write some heartfelt words here. It really caught my attention and I'll probably be waiting for new chapters and so on. Overall, it encourages reading and is quite interesting. Personally, I prefer comics even though I write stories myself, but it really caught my attention and I'll probably keep reading.

A cool cover overall, I'm just starting to read it, so I'll only say that the description intrigued me, and I'll definitely recommend the novel to my friend.